Uncovered (Round Two)

Another urgent breath upon your neck,
While contemplating your supportive wrap,
Looking over shoulders relieved of straps,
Giving your spectacles another check.
Before I deliver another peck,
Fingers and thumb press to create a trap,
Techniques that make fingers and fabric snap,
As the floor and the fabric have a wreck.
On your sides, my hands slide down to your waist,
Feeling fabric stitched with a lace so fine,
Using my thumbs to assist it with haste,
Pulling down to uncover your tan lines,
Finally preparing to test your taste,
While savoring the chance to make you mine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 11:55 AM
Here we go read it again,,hope you post your next round today,..p.d.
Hales Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 2:44 AM
So what do you think of mine you have not said ....waiting with held breathe .... sarah x
Conway Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 5:26 PM
Wonderful romance but I'm afraid my vote goes to Sarah this time as well!~Tirzah~
Muzzey Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 4:02 PM
Such romance, I love romance and you penned it well with eloquence. A wonderful write. Caryl
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:45 PM
Oh, Dakarai, this is awesome!! Quite erotic but so tasteful in a true romantic sense. Love, Carolyn
Hales Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:30 PM
DONE !!!!!
Hales Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 2:27 PM
ok here goes i wrote mine last night so i will now copy it to here ....!!!! Lets see this time yours is hot !!! sarah x
Falotico Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 1:26 PM
This is hot. need a shower lol well written..Michael
A   Avatar
June 20, 2010 at 1:21 PM
Oh! my you are so awesome, how come are you not enjoying yourself out there.. This is a good round two,,,love it and enjoyed it Doc. keep them coming,..always p.d.
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