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Majestically lissome, a stripling nothing less, slender in silhouette, a beauty in undress, standing starkly bared, every limb exposed. Not for an artist, but the splendour disclosed is singularly attractive, as any you’ll see: a natural vision of simplistic symmetry. Engrossed, unobserved, I’m quite overcome, with the naked comeliness, and soon become captivated by my view of aesthetic expertise. I’m seduced and excited with moves that please: beguiled by the elegance of effortless artistry, displayed in dance that suggests there’s mystery to discover in this unsophisticated display, innocently awaiting those who come this way, revealed in the rhythmic passion of this scene. Exhibited with the grace, of a ballerina queen; is the willowy naivete, of the young set free. Cavorting in nakedness is a Fall, sapling tree. Rhymer. February 12th, 2017. (Don't jump to conclusions!)

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Date: 3/24/2017 9:07:00 PM
Wonderful descriptive language, Denis! The twist ending was cute. Blessings, Kim
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Date: 2/12/2017 10:45:00 AM
Oh, I love this poem in its entirely for it is entirely beautifully written and delivered. Impressive creativity and a joy to read. I'm all aflutter! All the best ... CayCay
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