Uncool Scene

Shifty eyed men and women
standing around on a summer evening 
   Passing by them 
     I hear grumbling and veiled threats
Pays to be careful 
You don't want to become a newspaper crime story 
or another statistic 
    Summer in the vast metropolis 
Exciting yet dangerous 
I hurry past the crowd 
On the way to see my woman 
   She, too must be careful 
    to avoid an uncool scene 
city life requires caution 
So one can make the night smile 
In this - the asphalt homeland

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/4/2012 12:31:00 PM
This is very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..The city life is so different from the rural life...Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 6/3/2012 7:01:00 PM
seeing this one again, I sure wish you would enter Deb's Summer in the city contest. I know of nobody else here that writes as well as you do on the CITY.
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Date: 6/1/2012 6:24:00 PM
Doesn't matter if it's a he or she, it is good advice to stay vigilant. Enjoyed your poem, Matthew. Something to think about! I will send you mail to say what the poem was about. Joe)
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Date: 5/27/2012 10:25:00 PM
Very cool, Matthew! I too live in the city....& frequent rough neighborhoods for specialty foods...I have been confronted....but am pretty big guy...& just stand my ground like I do when I come across large mammals on my forest hikes in Superior Nat'l. Forest & just carry a 8" military blade on my hip for good measure!....thanks for visiting my work!....jimbo
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Date: 5/27/2012 5:45:00 PM
yes, I think it must be so dangerous to walk at night in parts of NY. and even during daytime. I bet you know a lot about your city. You have so many poems on it!!
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