Unconscious

unconscious he lies
near playground laden with snow
struck by fallen branch  


    The first blizzard of the season lasted a day and a half! Snow is piled up three feet high and schools and offices are closed. The power lines are down due to high winds and ice- not unusual here on the east coast this time of year. Snow drifts hug the window panes and tiny faces peer through, eager to go outdoors. They're excited to see the first major snow fall. All they see is the beauty. They could not know how deceptive it is.  I, along with the neighbors spend the afternoon cleaning cars; clearing walkways of snow and ice, along with fallen branches. Later the kids bring out their sleds which they’d already taken out of storage and  loud screeching and laughter ensue. I'm keeping busy helping to build snowmen and dodging snowballs then slowly, my anxiety begins to fade like the high winds that deposit these fantasy gardens. However, that was only temporary. Time for a while seems to past swiftly for me; still,Jim hasn’t returned home nor has he called.  Calls to his cell phone are unanswered.  No one has heard from him. Friends suggest he must be taking the back roads.  They head out to search, while I can do is pace, make hot chocolate and call to hospitals
   
~*~

01/25/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Kendrick Avatar
February 9, 2013 at 9:17 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Very descriptive..Congrats,..Sara
A   Avatar
February 7, 2013 at 10:50 AM
Hi Annalise, Congratulations on your winning "mixed up poem." Have yourself a nice day~ :-) xox~PD
Squyres Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 12:26 PM
What a scarey time that must have been.... Your haiku caught the action and the verse told the rest of the story. Enjoyed !! Congrats on your win!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 6, 2013 at 4:02 AM
Big congrats once more Annalise , well done xx
Arowolo Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 10:52 PM
Wonderful and nice write,friend.Congratulations on your well deserved win.Kudos to you,dear.
May Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 7:46 PM
congrats on your win Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 7:03 PM
This must have been so frightening! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Lamoureux Avatar
February 5, 2013 at 4:54 PM
I was sad that it had to end. Lovely piece, congrats
Sanders Avatar
January 31, 2013 at 5:58 AM
Wow, thats amazing. How beautiful. I'm still litsenning
Zerbst Avatar
January 28, 2013 at 12:13 PM
Great! The poetry and the storytelling. It creates a good suspense.
Richards Avatar
January 27, 2013 at 3:34 PM
Loved this poem, it actually made me anxious and fretful....I hope he made it home safely !! lol !! What a great piece you have written!
Guzzi Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 2:47 PM
Thanks so much for your entry! Light & Love [soup mail]
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace