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Unconditioonal Love - the Short Version

I live inside this bottle Because it makes me feel Like nothing else I've ever felt Don't tell me it's not real The Captain looked into my eyes And saw the pain that I denied He knew His love could set me free When I saw in Him what He saw in me.

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Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/29/2009 4:25:00 PM

nicely penned, great work

Jim Fish

Date: 6/7/2009 10:43:00 AM

I went back to your list of poems and there is no long version. What are you trying to do... feed us a spoonful at a time? lol I'm still reading... <><

Jim Fish

Date: 6/7/2009 10:40:00 AM

What! Where's the long version?! I'll go back to you list to see if I can find it. Again, very nice, instantly captures the imagination and your skillcraft is very nice. Thanks again... <><

Raul Moreno

Date: 4/20/2009 12:20:00 AM

Nice use of imagery, great work...Raul

Karen Abbott

Date: 4/15/2009 10:01:00 AM

Karen, first I thank you for your comment on my poem, Love Will Survive. The inspiration for my poem was a huge divide between my brother and me. I wanted him to know we could overcome any differences we might have. Our mending is a work in progress. I chose to read your poem Unconditional Love - the short version because it was posted on my Mom's birthday. Very well done. All my best wishes for you.

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

Date: 4/14/2009 2:33:00 AM

Karen, Karen, Karen this is sooo Powerful!!! Well done!!! Keep writing friend!!-Love You-Rhonda Kay

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/24/2009 3:30:00 AM

i love this type of unconditional love,your short version gives me a long thought,very nice-charma

Donald Cauthon

Date: 3/23/2009 10:55:00 PM

Hey gotta an extra bottle ya wanna sell? just kidding. great stuff. Keep on writing