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Unconditionally (Reversed-Verse)

I love -- though there be imperfections… For I am not quite perfected yet; Still I am striving to be… as sweet confections Without griping or regret Loving unconditionally --Yes-- Loving unconditionally Without griping or regret Still I am striving to be … as sweet confections For I am not quite perfected yet; I love-- though there be imperfections…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/1/2008 7:41:00 AM
Wow Adell. This is an awesome write! You are so talented and especially so with this style. Love how it works both ways, differently! Truly excellent. Love, Shar
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Date: 7/31/2008 3:31:00 PM
Interesting form - A gem of a poem - Loved the form and the message - God Bless
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Date: 7/31/2008 11:40:00 AM
I just love this poem. It makes my heart smile. You should post this one in "Divorce Court." This really says a lot. Great job! ~Joseph
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