Uncomplicated Blessings

Both my folks are still alive, blessed and lucky am I.
I have a work I do enjoy 
I have a bed, many wish they shared
I have the freedom to be me, many don’t have that liberty
I sometimes cry for things I really don’t need,
Then I look around at those who don’t have the bare necessities 
I’m truly blessed to live the life I do,
To pray, to shout, to laugh, to cry,
To see the world through my own eyes…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 10/27/2010 10:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dane Ann's contest Wilma. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:28:00 PM
A very touching list Wilma. Many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest, Wilma....Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:28:00 PM
Great writing. Great list of blessings. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:21:00 PM
Congrats on win.........Luv/Best wishes......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/1/2010 11:00:00 AM
OH good , I found one I'd missed. This is just so nice, Wilma. These are blessings that would make the whole world a better place if everyonen had these simple things! So who is the love interest? someone from Soup? heehee
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Date: 10/1/2010 10:11:00 AM
Thnx always Wilma for your kind comments on my writes... always appreciated my friend...Jimmy
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Date: 9/26/2010 5:40:00 AM
Heartfelt sweet write, its shows our beauty in and out....love it !!!!!!! love Michael....Golf was fun yesterday thank you for asking
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Date: 9/25/2010 12:22:00 PM
Awesomem Wilma! Great list that expresses gratitude really well. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 9/25/2010 12:17:00 PM
beautiful Wilma, coming to know you through your poetry I think God must be very proud of you, you have an inspiring attitude
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:51:00 AM
Wilma, there is a tremendous warm message in your words, thank you for sharing >> James
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:46:00 AM
Whenever we start to feel sorry for ourselves, all we need do is look around at the struggles others are facing. Enjoy every moment you can with your parents, Wilma. I'm glad I did when they were alive and have no regrets about not staying close to them. It sounds like you have a bright perspective on life, my friend. Best wishes for success in Dane Ann's contest. I think she'll love this one. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/25/2010 11:42:00 AM
i love the positive feel to this one, enjoyed your write...P.D.
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