Uncommon Sense

Uncommon Sense 

Uncommon sense comes to the fore,
Secretly telling us what lies in store.

Memory can be misplaced;
Destiny must surely be faced.
Fame vanishes into thin air;
Undue longing leads to despair.

Live, but never regret;
Forgive, but never forget.
Repent, but have no remorse;
Guilt sets the mind off course.

Loneliness right down to the bone;
Silence echoes the sound of stone.
Suspicion has very little trust;
Curiosity is considered a must.

Love often fragile emotions tear;
Sorrow never tender emotions spare.
Mystery contains a diaphanous veil;
Revelations tell a luminous tale.

Stupidity often inspires reproach;
Arrogance always dares approach.
False hopes linger as a taunting;
False desires linger as a haunting.

Restraint breathes without complaint;
Respect glows brightly like a saint.
Challenges at times can be bold;
Fulfillment comes in out of the cold.

Infancy bubbles like a fountain;
Adulthood like climbing a mountain.
Raw youth enjoys its fiery sensations;
Old age has its cold compensations.

This poem never seems to end;
Its uncommon sense desires to be penned.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/17/2017 2:10:00 AM
- An interesting poems, John - Our whole life is "like climbing a mountain" .... new goals every day - // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/17/2017 2:30:00 AM
You have a point, Anne-Lise. Thanks for reading and commenting. Positive feedback is always encouraging. JH
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