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blackened...ravenous crow on shady café chair eyeing menu 5/25/2018

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Date: 5/26/2018 10:39:00 AM
Awesome!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2018 10:47:00 AM
Thanks, Mark!
Date: 5/26/2018 1:25:00 AM
what a striking image, Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea!
Date: 5/25/2018 11:50:00 PM
I can picture this, and it's frightening.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/26/2018 8:07:00 AM
For sure! Thanks!
Date: 5/25/2018 1:59:00 PM
Nice Kim, with a touch of Hitchcock.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 9:48:00 PM
Thanks, Tom!!
Date: 5/25/2018 12:58:00 PM
Absolutely lovely imagery, Kim. A FAVE for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 9:49:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear Line!
Date: 5/25/2018 10:08:00 AM
Clever wording Kim..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 9:50:00 PM
Thanks so much, Silent!
Date: 5/25/2018 9:43:00 AM
HMMMM, I can interpret this in so many ways, still the crow always brings about an ominous feel to any poem. Well done Kim, ps . stay in the light,
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 9:51:00 PM
Always in the light! A full-bodied raven deserves a table...all to himself!
Date: 5/25/2018 8:36:00 AM
This is so specific, must have been something you saw once - enjoyed it!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 9:52:00 PM
An artist, i’ve met, posted such a pic on his facebook page. It screamed...hai ku hai ku ;)
Date: 5/25/2018 7:42:00 AM
Great one Kim! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 9:53:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 5/25/2018 7:14:00 AM
Love the last line Kim...Nicely done..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/25/2018 7:21:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph!