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Uncle Jim

He lived in a small place down by the river Raised a few chickens and a garden to tend Neat and clean but we knew he had little But to us children he was a dear friend Always ready to come play our silly games Or happy to listen to our childish tales of woe He knew when and where the fish were biting His wonderful tall tales he was glad to bestow He rode into town on his old cow names Irene She didn’t seem to mind at times being a horse If it rained he carried a big black umbrella It was a sight to see, we loved it of course You can imagine , our parents thought him odd And I guess he was if the whole truth be told But he was a special part of out young lives We wouldn’t have traded him for a bucket of gold… Believe it or not, this is a true story.. 10/23/14 Barbara Gorelick- Sketch a Character contest

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Date: 2/18/2015 2:40:00 AM
Wish I'd met your Uncle Jim, its great how characters always bring a happy and enduring smile. Loved this piece -Thanks Barbara!.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/18/2015 8:03:00 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poems, and for your encouraging comments. I will visit yours soon...Barbara
Date: 11/4/2014 7:53:00 PM
Wonderful person he must hv been Barbara! Congrats on ur awesome winning write!
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Date: 11/4/2014 6:48:00 PM
Such a delightful person he must have been! I would have loved to see him riding that cow!! What a hoot !! (My Grandmother taught her little pig to dance...wouldn't they have been a pair together ?) LOL !!
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Date: 11/4/2014 8:43:00 AM
I never doubted for a moment that he wasn't real as I read this heart warming poem. Congratulations on your win Barbara.
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Date: 11/3/2014 7:26:00 PM
Congrats on the win with the fine character sketch of Uncle Jim, Barb
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Date: 11/3/2014 4:47:00 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/3/2014 4:43:00 PM
It sounded real and quite delightful Barbara! I could visualize it perfectly. I had a pet calf named Daisy and they have a sweet personality if you make a pet of them. I think all animals do. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this little gem which is a fav for me!
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Date: 11/3/2014 12:23:00 PM
How I wish I could read more,the flow and the truth;congrats Barbara.
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Date: 11/3/2014 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your wonderful write winning in this contest.
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Date: 11/3/2014 10:56:00 AM
... And this is a very cute one! Loved it, Barbara. It's a very nice portrayal of good old Uncle Jim.. Congrats!!!!
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Date: 10/23/2014 6:15:00 PM
What a beautiful poem. I had an Uncle Jim, Also; he was actually more like a grandfather.
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:26:00 PM
oh you have painted a wonderful picture in my mind Barbara:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/23/2014 4:06:00 PM
I love this incredibly charming story. I think all children should have an Uncle Jim.
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