Uncle Jim

He lived in a small place down by the river
Raised a few chickens and a garden to tend
Neat and clean but we knew he had little
But to us children he was a dear friend

Always ready to come play our silly games
Or happy to listen to our childish tales of woe
He knew when and where the fish were biting
His wonderful tall tales he was glad to bestow

He rode into town on his old cow names Irene
She didn’t seem to mind at times being a horse
If it rained he carried a big black umbrella
It was a sight to see, we loved it of course

You can imagine , our parents thought him odd
And I guess he was if the whole truth be told
But he was a special part of out young lives
We wouldn’t have traded him for a bucket of gold…


Believe it or not, this is a true story..

10/23/14
Barbara Gorelick- Sketch a Character contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Gray Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 2:40 AM
Wish I'd met your Uncle Jim, its great how characters always bring a happy and enduring smile. Loved this piece -Thanks Barbara!.
Gorelick Avatar
February 18, 2015 at 8:03 AM
Thank you for stopping by my poems, and for your encouraging comments. I will visit yours soon...Barbara
A. Sharma Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 7:53 PM
Wonderful person he must hv been Barbara! Congrats on ur awesome winning write!
Richards Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 6:48 PM
Such a delightful person he must have been! I would have loved to see him riding that cow!! What a hoot !! (My Grandmother taught her little pig to dance...wouldn't they have been a pair together ?) LOL !!
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 8:43 AM
I never doubted for a moment that he wasn't real as I read this heart warming poem. Congratulations on your win Barbara.
Mehta Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 7:26 PM
Congrats on the win with the fine character sketch of Uncle Jim, Barb
Allison Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:47 PM
dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 4:43 PM
It sounded real and quite delightful Barbara! I could visualize it perfectly. I had a pet calf named Daisy and they have a sweet personality if you make a pet of them. I think all animals do. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this little gem which is a fav for me!
Kayode Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 12:23 PM
How I wish I could read more,the flow and the truth;congrats Barbara.
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your wonderful write winning in this contest.
Phookan Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:56 AM
... And this is a very cute one! Loved it, Barbara. It's a very nice portrayal of good old Uncle Jim.. Congrats!!!!
Kiser Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:15 PM
What a beautiful poem. I had an Uncle Jim, Also; he was actually more like a grandfather.
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 4:26 PM
oh you have painted a wonderful picture in my mind Barbara:-) Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xxx
Yvonne Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 4:06 PM
I love this incredibly charming story. I think all children should have an Uncle Jim.
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