Unclaimed Baggage

con conveyor  ~  belting blame





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Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Cox Avatar
May 15, 2020 at 10:02 AM
Alliteration, double meaning, with a hint of violence and trickery? Dave C
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May 15, 2020 at 12:27 PM
Sounda about right ;), xomo!
Gauthier Avatar
April 30, 2020 at 9:52 AM
Bravo, Maureen ~ so witty
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April 30, 2020 at 12:46 PM
Thank you Lovely, xomo
Zottola Avatar
April 29, 2020 at 8:45 AM
Scary, we think alike!
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April 29, 2020 at 8:51 AM
Lol! If you think like me I do fear for you! ;D, Made my day, thank you Ray! xomo
Neumann Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 6:51 AM
Wonderful. Short and poignant. Take care ...
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 24, 2020 at 7:14 AM
Thank you Kai, you too take care! These are crazy days. xomo
Koplin Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 12:19 PM
The magic conveyor, a true magician for some. Great one Mo!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 23, 2020 at 4:44 PM
Behind the curtain, wearing rollers ;),
Cash Avatar
April 22, 2020 at 12:52 AM
Haha, sure had a good laugh with this one Maureen. Some of our luggage went missing one year. But all in all, two days later the airport called and sent it right to our address. Sure do like your style of writing.
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April 22, 2020 at 9:05 AM
Thank you Theresa! xomo
Deo Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 6:54 PM
Imagine being conned by a conveyor, the nerve (of the belt!) Shalom-shalom
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April 21, 2020 at 7:12 PM
To be read as deep or as shallow as you desire. The nerve. I hope you are well my poetry friend, xomo
Lamoureux Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 8:41 AM
;0)
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April 21, 2020 at 12:06 PM
Just a quacking Canuck ;), Hugs dear poet
Krutsinger Avatar
April 21, 2020 at 2:02 AM
In but a few words you have nailed what is happening.
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April 21, 2020 at 12:05 PM
Caren, it is so scary. HUGS!!!!!!
Gauthier Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 7:08 AM
Very witty, Maureen. Like it.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 20, 2020 at 4:39 PM
Thank you Line! xomo
Smith Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 4:15 PM
What a bright write, I love it Maureen...
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April 19, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Thank you Charlie :))))
One Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 2:16 PM
Is it better to leave it unclaimed?
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 2:57 PM
Negative. Own it!
May Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 1:24 PM
Very nicely done Mo, belting blame in the baggae claim..
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April 19, 2020 at 1:32 PM
Thank you Joseph! Nobody wants it ;), xomo
Leffanta Avatar
April 19, 2020 at 1:23 PM
Not so much now with terminals near empty, but trust Trump to multiply confusion! Aloha! Rico
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April 19, 2020 at 1:30 PM
Exactly ;D, Keep safe my friend, xomo!
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