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Unclaimed Baggage

con conveyor ~ belting blame ***

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Dave Cox

Date: 5/15/2020 10:02:00 AM

Alliteration, double meaning, with a hint of violence and trickery? Dave C

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 5/15/2020 12:27:00 PM

Sounda about right ;), xomo!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/30/2020 9:52:00 AM

Bravo, Maureen ~ so witty

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/30/2020 12:46:00 PM

Thank you Lovely, xomo

Ray Zottola

Date: 4/29/2020 8:45:00 AM

Scary, we think alike!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/29/2020 8:51:00 AM

Lol! If you think like me I do fear for you! ;D, Made my day, thank you Ray! xomo

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/24/2020 6:51:00 AM

Wonderful. Short and poignant. Take care ...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/24/2020 7:14:00 AM

Thank you Kai, you too take care! These are crazy days. xomo

Mark Koplin

Date: 4/23/2020 12:19:00 PM

The magic conveyor, a true magician for some. Great one Mo!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/23/2020 4:44:00 PM

Behind the curtain, wearing rollers ;),

Theresa M. Cash

Date: 4/22/2020 12:52:00 AM

Haha, sure had a good laugh with this one Maureen. Some of our luggage went missing one year. But all in all, two days later the airport called and sent it right to our address. Sure do like your style of writing.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/22/2020 9:05:00 AM

Thank you Theresa! xomo

Anil Deo

Date: 4/21/2020 6:54:00 PM

Imagine being conned by a conveyor, the nerve (of the belt!) Shalom-shalom

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/21/2020 7:12:00 PM

To be read as deep or as shallow as you desire. The nerve. I hope you are well my poetry friend, xomo

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/21/2020 8:41:00 AM

;0)

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/21/2020 12:06:00 PM

Just a quacking Canuck ;), Hugs dear poet

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/21/2020 2:02:00 AM

In but a few words you have nailed what is happening.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/21/2020 12:05:00 PM

Caren, it is so scary. HUGS!!!!!!

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2020 7:08:00 AM

Very witty, Maureen. Like it.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/20/2020 4:39:00 PM

Thank you Line! xomo

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/19/2020 4:15:00 PM

What a bright write, I love it Maureen...

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/19/2020 4:40:00 PM

Thank you Charlie :))))

Silent One

Date: 4/19/2020 2:16:00 PM

Is it better to leave it unclaimed?

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/19/2020 2:57:00 PM

Negative. Own it!

Joseph May

Date: 4/19/2020 1:24:00 PM

Very nicely done Mo, belting blame in the baggae claim..

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/19/2020 1:32:00 PM

Thank you Joseph! Nobody wants it ;), xomo

Rico Leffanta

Date: 4/19/2020 1:23:00 PM

Not so much now with terminals near empty, but trust Trump to multiply confusion! Aloha! Rico

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 4/19/2020 1:30:00 PM

Exactly ;D, Keep safe my friend, xomo!