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Unclad Flower

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                 Crunch
    left-over leaves of winter

                   Peek
  the premature green growth
                of spring

                  Touch
    the unclad flower’s bloom
    at the climax of Summer’s 
                   zenith

Copyright © James Peranteau | Year Posted 2011

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Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/31/2011 7:34:00 AM enjoyed reading. Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 3/23/2011 8:03:00 AM Just pouring my second cup of morning coffee and you have me wishing and dreaming of flowers on this cold , sunny day. We still have 3 feet of snow around but slowly melting a little each day. love phyl Login to Reply

C.C Bloomsfield Date: 3/23/2011 4:03:00 AM Beautiful poem flourishing perfume on paper. . .lovely to read you again dear poet. Login to Reply

Joe Maverick Date: 3/21/2011 2:41:00 PM enjoyed the free spirit i found, in the direction this worthy write, that leads my senses on James. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/21/2011 1:52:00 AM enjoyed this wonderful heart rendering poem, James. Harry Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 3/19/2011 5:25:00 PM soft smile, a woman named Summer how lovely! Please read Differences Divine to Noah! Show him Robb's Picture too! [contest] Light & Love Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 3/19/2011 5:19:00 AM And a beautiful, long awaited flower it is, Sir James. At the moment my entire being is concerned with the sensation of approaching spring, but love your summer thoughts. Love, Dave Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/18/2011 8:34:00 PM James u charm me with your sweet comments my friend .. deeply understanding my lines so well ... appreciate your input into my contest entries luv.. joyous always to read your lines ..happy weekend... Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 3/18/2011 8:18:00 PM Oh James this is beautiful. Your images are so close to nature and lovingly penned. Thanks for all your support to me. much appreciated. Login to Reply

Dana Smith Date: 3/18/2011 4:46:00 PM Awwww:) Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 3/18/2011 11:59:00 AM I love your title for this one James, has a lovely feeling to it as well.. smiles to you ;) and enjoy the weekend ahead, love Wilma Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 3/18/2011 8:29:00 AM Beautiful budding thoughts put forth in full bloom, James. You also have a wonderful weekend. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/18/2011 8:22:00 AM So you've met a girl named Summer, James? She sounds lovely, dear friend. I have been busy lately and returned your Soup mail. Love you always, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/18/2011 8:19:00 AM May I return the sweet comment James and say Summer is my best time of the Season for I excel in everything as the hot weather inspires me every moment.. this lovely piece is so visually aromatic I can touch the lines with my mind my friend.. ever a joy to read your work James..happy weekend luv.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 3/18/2011 7:27:00 AM what a mood cheery and sublime... great write that lifts my soul, james... no wonder spring and summer are between winter and fall! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/16/2011 11:01:00 PM HOw nice, and symbolic too I see!! You had four wives, james?? geeez! Cupid got you good. hahaha Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 3/16/2011 9:38:00 PM yes and a smile to you,,, sure enjoyed,, your poem,, and just the other day a friend,, told me,, nothing becomes everything of beauty,,, meaning old leaves find a way of beauty,,, ((bloom)).. and when we die,, i thought we fell into a world of nothingness,,, but truly we bloom for eternity,, well my thought,,lol,,, still a cool poem,, and i will smile,,, enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply