Unchained

Unchained

with hushed heated breath
I wait  shadowed by the moon
for Spring's last thunder
so that we may crash as one
eyes to eyes each chain broken.


~deborah burch©
4/09/2012
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Aul Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 12:56 PM
Congrats.........George
Dietrich Avatar
April 17, 2012 at 7:15 PM
BIG congratulations for you.
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Deborah. Love, Carol
Taylor Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb. Amazing. Great job. hugs, Ralph
Burch Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 7:42 AM
thank you Ralph...big hugs, love deb
Neels Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 1:46 PM
love that "crash as one" line Deborah, congratulations on your win with this beauty! :) love Wilma
Burch Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 7:45 AM
LOL...yeah Wilma...kinda like that myself *blush* ;) thank you so much my friend!! big hugs, love deb---and congrats to you on your wins!!
Sweetheart Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 8:11 AM
congrats Deborah on another xciting win for this exquisite write luv..
Arowolo Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:36 AM
Congrats Deb on your super win.nice and wonderful piece.I love the flow.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 6:55 AM
Congratulations on your super win with this passionate piece Deb xx
Burch Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 7:47 AM
Thank you ~GG~ and Big Congrats to you on your BIG wins lately....woot woot!! :) big hugs,love deb
Nair Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Very pasionate write, Deb, that deserves the placement, Congrats and thanks, hugs, jag
Burch Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 7:46 AM
thank you Jag so much!! And big congrats to you on your wins...awsome job you're doing! big hugs, love deb
The Drunken Poet Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:37 AM
very capturing . this is adored
Burch Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:53 AM
thank you very much Elliott...
Poet Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 11:16 PM
Such a romantic poem here.Love it.Thanks for your inspiring words.
Burch Avatar
April 11, 2012 at 1:52 AM
Ohhh, you're so welcome Kash...big huggsss...thank you for your kindness,love deb
Aul Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 2:36 PM
Nicely done........George
Burch Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 7:25 PM
Thank you so much George!!
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 1:41 PM
sounds sensual, Deborah!!! NICE
Burch Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 7:26 PM
lol...indeed! ;) thanks Andrea...hugs,love deb
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 7:21 AM
1-6 lines of Romance and Love....You have it. - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise
Burch Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 7:24 PM
awww, thank you Anne Lise my dear friend...big huggsss,love deb
Onclaud Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:33 AM
a wonderful twist of romance, deborah.. winning wishes and huggs! :)
Burch Avatar
April 10, 2012 at 6:51 PM
Thanx nette...huggsss :)
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