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Unchained

Unchained with hushed heated breath I wait shadowed by the moon for Spring's last thunder so that we may crash as one eyes to eyes each chain broken. ~deborah burch© 4/09/2012

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George Aul

Date: 4/18/2012 12:56:00 PM

Congrats.........George

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/17/2012 7:15:00 PM

BIG congratulations for you.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 1:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Deborah. Love, Carol

Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/15/2012 5:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Deb. Amazing. Great job. hugs, Ralph

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 7:42:00 AM

thank you Ralph...big hugs, love deb

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/15/2012 1:46:00 PM

love that "crash as one" line Deborah, congratulations on your win with this beauty! :) love Wilma

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 7:45:00 AM

LOL...yeah Wilma...kinda like that myself *blush* ;) thank you so much my friend!! big hugs, love deb---and congrats to you on your wins!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2012 8:11:00 AM

congrats Deborah on another xciting win for this exquisite write luv..

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 4/15/2012 7:36:00 AM

Congrats Deb on your super win.nice and wonderful piece.I love the flow.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 4/15/2012 6:55:00 AM

Congratulations on your super win with this passionate piece Deb xx

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 7:47:00 AM

Thank you ~GG~ and Big Congrats to you on your BIG wins lately....woot woot!! :) big hugs,love deb

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 4/15/2012 6:39:00 AM

Very pasionate write, Deb, that deserves the placement, Congrats and thanks, hugs, jag

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/16/2012 7:46:00 AM

thank you Jag so much!! And big congrats to you on your wins...awsome job you're doing! big hugs, love deb

Elliott Bowe The Drunken Poet

Date: 4/11/2012 1:37:00 AM

very capturing . this is adored

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/11/2012 1:53:00 AM

thank you very much Elliott...

Kash Poet

Date: 4/10/2012 11:16:00 PM

Such a romantic poem here.Love it.Thanks for your inspiring words.

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/11/2012 1:52:00 AM

Ohhh, you're so welcome Kash...big huggsss...thank you for your kindness,love deb

George Aul

Date: 4/10/2012 2:36:00 PM

Nicely done........George

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 7:25:00 PM

Thank you so much George!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/10/2012 1:41:00 PM

sounds sensual, Deborah!!! NICE

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 7:26:00 PM

lol...indeed! ;) thanks Andrea...hugs,love deb

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/10/2012 7:21:00 AM

1-6 lines of Romance and Love....You have it. - Luck to you in contest! - oxox love Anne-Lise

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 7:24:00 PM

awww, thank you Anne Lise my dear friend...big huggsss,love deb

Nette Onclaud

Date: 4/10/2012 6:33:00 AM

a wonderful twist of romance, deborah.. winning wishes and huggs! :)

Deborah Burch
Date: 4/10/2012 6:51:00 PM

Thanx nette...huggsss :)