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Uncertainty

UNCERTAINTY A Poem by Debbie_Philly " A matter Of Trust " Uncertainty Everyday in everyway Words, action, thoughts Get twisted to fit the play Honesty, integrity, truth HONOR Those words The meanings are so far From the lips of today’s Fellow man There was a time when Someone would say “I give you my word” They meant it My mind is encased With the intentions Of others The paths they lead to Are rarely golden We must open our hearts Open our minds To another time When men stood For something Stood by their words Said them with conviction Stuck by their actions I do not see this in the Eyes and minds of todays Man It breaks my heart I sure as hell never wanted To die alone These days one never knows By: Debbie Kelly

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Theresa Stephens

Date: 2/5/2014 5:13:00 AM

Hi Debbie, Congratulations on achieving No. 1 position. I have often thought the same sentiments. There seems to be something basically wrong in praising rude behaviour and denigrating good. You are a truly an enlightened soul. God bless you in your life. I truly hope you shall find the inspiration to write more poetry to awaken the dulled senses of some of the misguided souls we may find ourselves involved with as we travel through this world together. Regards Theresa xx

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:03:00 PM

What a beautiful comment Theresa thank you so much... it means allot to me that you took the time to read my piece... I will be over to visit you as well... Thank you so much again and have a beautiful day !! :)

Chris Boskovski

Date: 2/4/2014 8:05:00 PM

A great poem, I agree with you Debbie. A great write, as always. Lovely as fresh roses in full bloom in the month of May! :) xoxo

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:04:00 PM

Awww Chris thank you so much... you are always very sweet !! :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/4/2014 6:25:00 PM

I believe there are many honorable men and women who's words hold meaning. I so often hear people in my age group talk about the young people of today and how they are somehow less honorable than our generation. From my experience I can say there are amazing young people and I think the future holds great possibilities. I enjoyed your thought provoking poem

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/5/2014 1:06:00 PM

Thank you so much Richard... I really appreciate you coming over to read me and I will be over to see you :) YEs I agree... allot of men have honor in their words... but at the time I was dealing with the ones who dont ;) Thank you again !!

Robby's Multimedia Poetry

Date: 2/4/2014 5:05:00 PM

This reminds me a bit of my poem "Golden Age" which focuses on how people focus on a time that never was, an idealized white picket fence with a happy family with 2.5 kids going to a great college sort of time.

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/4/2014 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Robby and Welcome.... yea I wrote more on a personal level but allot of people read it differently and its great.. I love to hear what people get out of my pieces ... Thanks again... will be over to see you !!

Peter Walsh

Date: 2/4/2014 11:07:00 AM

Stay true to yourself Debbie....hold onto your beliefs and what you look for will find you...lovely heartfelt well written piece welcome to poetry soup...not long here myself, a great bunch of people ...

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/4/2014 5:04:00 PM

Thank you so much Peter for the read and the welcome... its a pretty great place... Thanks again... I will be over to read you as well ! :)

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/4/2014 1:43:00 AM

Honesty, truth, integrity, and honor are rare commodities. They always have been, and always will be. That's why there are so many used car salesmen and politicians around.

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/4/2014 5:05:00 PM

Hey Robert... Thank you again so much for reading me... I like seeing you here !! :)

Agnes Bugeja

Date: 2/4/2014 1:06:00 AM

Debbie again this hits home...lol!!!! just had this conversation with my ex...A man should be a man of his word..love it!

Debbie Mills-Kelly
Date: 2/4/2014 1:07:00 AM

I so agree.. I guess you can tell allot these were written during that type of turmoil... though it is a great muse :) Thank you again hun !!