Uncanny Unbroken Luck

Knick knacks were at the top of my gift list
one stood out and walked over too brisk
slow motion it fell
still intact I could tell
sudden turn with huge purse a high risk!




9-8-17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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September 11, 2017 at 4:12 PM
This is another good one! Your have an uncanny unbroken knack for limericks! Good job!!...Pat
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September 11, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Thanks so much for very kind comment and visit; I'm glad you like my limericks!~Che :)
Adams Avatar
September 11, 2017 at 4:08 PM
This is another good one! Your have and uncanny unbroken knack for limericks! Good job!!
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