Unbutton

Beyond breaths that leave the being breathless,
                       such a wait is becoming unbearable,
                                the flight of fingertips  
                                                    fumble before they feel

                           Shall I cease the excitement

            When I was invited,
                    in magical moments so real?

                                              
               To begin again -
                       being patient, of that I am truly able             
                            while the view leaves the being speechless,
                                               I am breathless 
                          
                         as you Unbutton, 
                                        new possibilities



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Something playful
~ Open to new moments ~

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Running Wolves

Date: 1/17/2020 10:26:00 PM

In this moment I'm certain... I must draw the curtains... Then turn... The lights down low... Even better... Let candlelight glow... For this is the evening... Of which I've been dreaming... Watching the last button go... Darn... The alarm clock is screaming... Its time to stop dreaming... Now it's off to work I go...Siiigh...tee hee

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/17/2020 11:28:00 PM

Oh my!!! Your thoughts make me smile and blush, all at the same time. You are embracing this moment it seems. Thank you for reading this little scribble of mine. For this wonderful comment. :) Brandy

Old Buck

Date: 3/31/2019 2:08:00 PM

Brandy: The closest I ever got to anything this "playful" might be A Short Indian Tale. Keep them coming. oldbuck

Brandy Nicole
Date: 3/31/2019 6:27:00 PM

Thank you Buck! Your thoughts bring a smile and a make me blush. :) Your kind words are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/13/2019 8:40:00 PM

ooh la la. This is playful and wonderfully naughty.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/13/2019 9:41:00 PM

I am blushing. :) Thank you Andrea. I appreciate your kind words. ~ Brandy

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/13/2019 8:09:00 PM

Hi Brandy, this is a wonderful write. I love the sensuality, such divine words painting such a beautiful canvas. An excellent write Brandy. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/13/2019 9:40:00 PM

Thank you Mike. I appreciate your thoughts. Poetry is art in motion. :) In this, moments move. I hope you have a nice Monday. ~ Brandy

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/13/2019 3:09:00 PM

Wonderful the way this "unbuttons" as one reads...very well done.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/13/2019 7:39:00 PM

Thank you M.L. Kiser. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/12/2019 8:27:00 PM

How could I not read something called, "Unbutton"? I crawled out of my gutter and clicked right over. This sizzles to reveal wit. Enjoyed the wit and the wit-foreplay. Clever one (meaning you.) Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/12/2019 10:08:00 PM

:) Unbutton could mean, anything. New moments. Well, it means that here, in a way. Of course in this, it means what you think it does. Something playful and sensual. Thank you CayCay. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Awe, I am not clever, I am just me. I appreciate you and your kind words. Hugs, Brandy

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/11/2019 3:20:00 PM

Such a charming and sensual piece that brought smiles knowing how special anticipation can be. I love this Brandy! : ) xxoo

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/11/2019 8:09:00 PM

Thank you Connie. :) Your kind words are appreciated. Such a wonderful comment. Happy New Year. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/11/2019 9:12:00 AM

A very sensual poem Brandy, and you have portrayed the excitement of such a breathless trip perfectly! A great write. Very well penned my friend. Poetry wishes, Jennifer.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/11/2019 10:53:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer. Yes, this holds a breathless beginning. Love and passion. Moments of many possibilities. I appreciate you and your lovely comment. :) My best to you. ~ Brandy

David Byrne

Date: 1/10/2019 11:51:00 PM

I see the fingertips, nice :)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/11/2019 10:38:00 AM

Thank you David. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/10/2019 6:53:00 PM

Oh, the delicious devil in the details! The journey is ALWAYS more enjoyable than the destination, and buttons and snaps are the most wonderfully-intended little toys to play with ... they temper the mind, whet the imagination, and build the most glorious and scrumptious of suspense! What a charmingly sensuous and imaginative poem, my friend, this is a must-save, and a multiple read. Blessings to you - I hope you had a wonderful holiday and New Year! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/10/2019 8:31:00 PM

Oh my!!! Yes, I agree, the journey is very enjoyable indeed. Slowly undressing the moment. Reaching the destination, makes lingering- ohhhhh sooooo worth the wait. Soft sighs certainly are an invitation to stay, even longer. Thank you Greg for reading this playful little scribble, and for adding it to your favorites. Happy New Year to you. :) Brandy

Chris Green

Date: 1/10/2019 11:31:00 AM

Beautifully expressed Brandy. This held the softest touch as it flow before my eyes.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/10/2019 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Chris. I appreciate you and your kind words. Yes, the possibilities are endless, when a soft touch lingers. :) Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/9/2019 1:48:00 PM

love the subtle yet impassioned expression of something so magical, brandy...greeat work!..huggs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/9/2019 8:57:00 PM

:) Your thoughts always bring a smile. Thank you nette. I appreciate you and your kind words. Hugs, Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 1/6/2019 9:07:00 AM

Very nicely expressed Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/6/2019 6:11:00 PM

Thank you Joseph. I appreciate you and your thoughts. :) Brandy

Gerald Greene

Date: 1/5/2019 11:56:00 AM

Very nicely done. Interesting and clever.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/5/2019 8:26:00 PM

Thank you Gerald. I appreciate your thoughts. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 1/5/2019 9:04:00 AM

Countless possibilities...when the hands of love unbutton...Happy 2019

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/5/2019 8:25:00 PM

Yes, the possibilities certainly are endless, with moments of love. Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts are appreciated. Happy New Year! :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 1/5/2019 7:35:00 AM

Wow, Brandy, just the title of this stirred my imagination and the poem didn't disappoint. I am taken back to my first love, the first time, and my fumbling fingertips. I remember the anticipation within, but I have never heard this from the female's point of view. This is a beautiful, sensual poem my friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/5/2019 8:24:00 PM

One word, can say so much and have different meanings!! Unbutton. :) Awe, and first time moments, can make one nervous. Thank you for your thoughts my friend, they are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/5/2019 7:17:00 AM

Magical moments indeed! A sensuous breeze..truly speechless..teasing the senses to new possibilities. Excellent romantic write, Brandy. Beautifully, succinctly done.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/5/2019 8:07:00 PM

Exactly!! Being open to new moments, new possibilities- can be very exciting indeed. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. This is sensual and inviting. Thank you Vijay. I appreciate you and your kind words. ~ Brandy