Unburied

She pounded the last nail into the lid of the coffin
The coffin that held her dream
She sat there for a while
In the silence
Thinking of all it had meant
What it was meant to be
Her dream
She threw herself over the coffin
And wracked away with sobs
The last hopes that lay
Buried deep within her

Silence
No one had come to mourn
No one had said a word
Except when her dream was alive and well
Only then
Then…they told her
“Look at the tell-tale signs
Can’t you see?
Something is amiss
Your dream…Your dream is…sick
It won’t make it
It won’t survive.”

She hadn't believed them
Thought they had lied
Yet, here she was

She wiped her tears away
What did they know?
What did they care?
How could they understand…
That wrapped up there in her dream
Was her beating heart

She could not bear to bury it
So, she pushed it underneath the shade
Of a weeping willow tree
Weeping 
Weeping
For who she couldn't be
And she walked away

Dreamless
Heartless
Dead….

Unburied!

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Vaso Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:28 PM
Well, its been busy days, but I guess cause I being a bit blue, I came to read some, and came back to read this one! Sure fits my mood at the moment!!!
Manassian Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:30 PM
Hey...don't be sad, Arthur...Life is what it is...we got to keep going...The time will come for all of us...but till then, we got to do what we can to make it beautiful...Sending you hugs, sweetie!
Vaso Avatar
April 11, 2014 at 10:11 PM
Doubts? I doubt anyone could tell a story as this as well as you just did!! WOW You amaze me!
Manassian Avatar
August 12, 2014 at 9:31 PM
WOW! How did I miss this sweet post...Love it, Arthur...Thanks! Glad you are amazed.
Seal Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 7:59 PM
Keep the dream alive my little Desert Orchid, you know you have what it takes, a gift for writing stupendous poems like the one above, I'm sure it will happen. Take care, Richard
Manassian Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 12:36 PM
No, Richard. That's the whole thing. I don't. :( I used to think that maybe....but since joining this site....and seeing all the fine poetry here...I've come to realize...I'm just a drop in a bucket! I won't kid you. The dream is slowly dying...and so is my heart. Thanks, though, for the wonderful encouragement. I love and value your work and your opinion.
Lawless Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:46 PM
Wonderful. A subtle and complex poetic expression. An invitation to investigate the death of a dream. I feel this poem is a mirror in which any who read it will find a bit of themselves. Freakin' Awesome!!!!
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:55 PM
:-) Thanks for visiting....and for this freakin' awesome post!!!
Carrillo Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:53 AM
This is really, really good. A lot of imagination. Great work as always... Lucilla
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 1:42 PM
Thanks, my dear Lucilla....This just poured out of my heart....It touched things that are very dear to me...and the last of my dreams....I hope it doesn't die...I so hope it doesn't die. Thanks for visiting with your kind words. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 10:21 AM
Change believe to believed. Now for the important part, brilliant! Powerful! Moving! Exceptional! Favorite! 77777777!
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 1:44 PM
You are an editing angel! Thanks for caring enough to point those out to me. :) Thanks ever so much! Exceptional has me smiling....Hugs
Pickett Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Excellent piece. The willow caught my eye, I love that tree. So, I attempted your new form and I thought I would drop you a line. Random Thoughts 63, Eileenesque!! I hope I did it right, let me know. Good work my friend!!Asavvy1
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 1:47 PM
Thanks, Jared. Yes, the willow IS my favorite tree...I also love jacaranda trees...Oh...the splendor when those purple flowers bloom. Thanks again...for trying out my form. The theme was moving....and the form was great. you know...It works your and Flo's way too, but I commented on some changes. :) Just wanted it to be a bit different than the swap quatrain and more ME! ;) Thanks ever so much!
Callus Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:52 AM
Ah! but still unburied; that leaves a scope for hope, reincarnation....//so heartfelt// paul
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:54 PM
Yes...a woman has her dreams...Not all can be fulfilled. I had to give up a dream because I'm a woman. Some things are just harder for us...This dream is about my work...my poetry...I hope one day to be published but who knows??? Maybe I don't have what it takes...The dream has taken a few blows of late...let's keep hoping..Thanks for asking....
Callus Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 2:02 PM
Eileen, I know little about your private life, but you are married, and a woman has her dream/s as well...but perhaps I'm totally off the mark!
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 1:48 PM
Yes...without hope, how would we survive? I do hope that I don't have to bury this last dream of mine, Paul....Thanks for visiting me!
Pettit Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 12:44 AM
Edgar Allen Poe would be impressed with this write if he were alive today. Fanciful descriptiveness.
Manassian Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 1:49 PM
YOU THINK SO???? Oh....I'm so thrilled with this post! I love POE....Life is but...a dream within a dream. Thanks ever so much, Robert. This is high praise indeed! :)
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