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Lifespan veils birth, growth, and fade,
live in realm of light and shade.
Who are you? Who am I? mom!
Are we the far-off orb charm?
Are we the rivers close by?
We are earth, water, and sky.
Lifespan veils birth, growth, and fade.


Written: July 5th, 2021


Elemental Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina

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Paula Goldsmith Date: 8/1/2021 11:54:00 AM WOW!!! Congratulations on your win. What a creative story/write. I wish I was in your pretty picture. Have a blessed day with your win............... Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 7/31/2021 5:09:00 AM Great write, Lasaad. A thought provoking poem indeed. Congratulations on a fine win. Charlie Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/31/2021 8:17:00 AM Thank you very much, Charles. I appreciate your reading and placement of my poem in one of your contests, which I like participating in—kindest regards and best wishes to you.

Christuraj Alex Date: 7/31/2021 4:32:00 AM Beautifully Written. Congratulations on your placement! Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/31/2021 8:18:00 AM Thanks, Alex appreciate it

Caren Krutsinger Date: 7/9/2021 4:03:00 AM We really are "We are earth, water, and sky." I believe we are all part of each other. Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 7/6/2021 8:26:00 AM Each generation asks the same question and each provides its own answer however, the question is eternal and the balance of life is maintained within the limits the creator has set. If the linitsvare exceeded then catastrophe follows. A very deep thought that requires deeper analysis, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Excellent writing. Blessings Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/6/2021 11:03:00 AM Thank you, dear friend, Demetrios; I was impressed by your thoughtful comment, which helped make my poem even better. Your insightful and profound ideas are a must be learning for anybody interested, like the content. I am grateful for your generosity and golden heart, as well as for the important help you offer.

Delice Arleen Skelly Date: 7/5/2021 10:13:00 PM I like the idea behind this poem and the elemental force that drives humanity... Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/6/2021 10:55:00 AM Thank you very much, Arleen, your kind words are uplifting, have a wonderful day

David Kavanagh Date: 7/5/2021 12:43:00 PM You certainly delve deep here Lasaad, I like the questions you ask, it reminds me of the movie ‘the thin red line’ where the main character and narrator, keeps asking himself and tries to make sense of life, in the uncertainty of battle, fine poem and reflective pondering, cheers David Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/5/2021 1:26:00 PM Thank you so much, David, your insightful comment shed more allure on my poem, and I'm so glad you like it, my kindest regards and hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 7/5/2021 12:19:00 PM An absorbing and elegantly crafted haiku, Lasaad. You have an impressive contest entry. Good luck. Hugs and blessings, Evelyn :) Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/5/2021 1:27:00 PM Thank you very much, Evelyn, for reading and sending positive vibes about this poem. Blessings and warm hugs.

L Milton Hankins Date: 7/5/2021 11:03:00 AM Vital questions and concerns, Lasaad. It seems to me that life is sometimes more fade than growth! I do like to be optimistic, however. Interesting read, my friend. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/5/2021 11:21:00 AM Thank you so much, Milton, for reading and commenting. I think you are right. Are we on our way to global fading?

Victor Buhagiar Date: 7/5/2021 10:37:00 AM Everything that begins must end. Pity, But there is another world for us. Login to Reply Sotto Poet Date: 7/5/2021 10:44:00 AM So true, dear Victor, everything is fading sooner or later. Just have hope in the Lord and wait.