Unbridgeable Chasm

when distance cuts at love
           confounding closeness
we grumble at Skype connecting
                           broken in its transmitting
togetherness that edges to confusion 
turbulence in modernity
when we're unsure of what lies ahead
in slim rays of long distance longing

can love fall its way to slumber?

our chasm
settling in our lost sleep
life imperfect like the moon in pot mark littering
space junk
to trigger all our fretting

we sense where things are headed
with careers of solo plotting 
no romp of a reunion, pending
lives that long a re-uniting are tangled
                    like Christmas tree lighting 
no strategy for bridging this abyss 
when the desire to live one's life
                 unencumbered 
                 pushes all else aside

                 like pens tapping on a desk
                 restless in the waiting
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:46 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this great poem, Brian:-) I love your distinctive style of writing! Loved this.
Sambourne Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Edward, for the placement in your contest. I hope that all is well with you + that your muse carries your pen forward. Sincerely, Brian
Alex Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:26 AM
"like the moon in pot mark littering" - Great comparison. Congratulations!
Sambourne Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Thank you, Christuraj. Best wishes, Brian
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