Unbridgeable Chasm

A brilliant sky - a hopeful day and night But broods and churns, the haunt of beast and plight. No kneading dough nor kneeling praise nor shout - Before the cross was laid, there’s no way out. The stretch between heaven and hell, no game. A farmer or preacher could not stake claim. With deep bruises, blood-red, the chasm has clout. Before the cross was laid, there’s no way out. Unsettling spores, the slithering…it’s war. Get used to whip of snow and sun…its roar. The walking dead transverse the sea of doubt. Before the cross was laid, there’s no way out. Ferocious waves, an unlit path with rocks. A flaming sword, wrath of cherubim-locks. Eternity without a save - sealed route. Before the cross was laid, there’s no way out.
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Ibeh Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:41 AM
Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this splendid poem, Kim:-) Striking imagery!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Thank you, Edward!
Alex Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:16 AM
"Before the cross was laid, there’s no way out" - Great thought beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Thank you, Chris!
DiMino Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:27 AM
Another FAV my friend! Lots of wisdom in your work. People complain about the weather, droughts, storms and disease -- though the truth stare us in the face...God does not will bad on humanity...all calamity are product of our Freewill manifesting. Christ showed humanity the way...yet, 2000 years later, mankind remains on his own failing path. What is going on with the Obama/Biden administration, the shelving of law and morals should be disgusting to all. Great write!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 6:24 AM
Thanks, Joe! So thankful for our Savior! How sad that many believe no one is watching. Without shame many work against God. The lines are drawn. We decide where we stand.
Rose  Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Thank God for the cross and the light that paved the path for us dear Kim, I love what you did to the subject matter. You got my vote !
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 7:20 PM
Thank you so much, Rose xx
Buhagiar Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 9:43 AM
I always pray for the departed souls of the Old Testament. I'm sure in God's compassion, many have achieved eternal bliss. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 11:17 AM
I am sure! Hugs ~ Kim
Andresen Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:02 AM
- A powerful line ..."The stretch between heaven and hell, no game" - Great written, Kim - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2023 at 8:37 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
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