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Unbreakable

I've tasted your love I have tasted all your pain your mine all the same you have climbed in me your soft hands held my soul I'm yours forever

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/22/2011 3:06:00 PM

Another one of yours I missed. many romantic ones on your list!!

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/21/2011 5:43:00 AM

So much beauty and promise in this senryu.. Love it (",) W

Gert W. Knop

Date: 1/20/2011 6:40:00 AM

Very emotional and well written Senryus, my friend Michael! And thank you for your kind comment on ma Haiku-win! Have a nice day!...Gert

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/20/2011 6:18:00 AM

you make a sentimental fool of me, michael! wonderful love colors in this piece! :) huggs, nette

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/19/2011 2:38:00 PM

Wonderful and Beautiful!!! Christine

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/19/2011 2:19:00 PM

wonderful short verse! revealing a true sweet heart. Light & Love

Sharon Ruebel

Date: 1/18/2011 1:32:00 PM

Hello Michael, This could only be written by someone who is deeply in love. Beautiful, just beautiful! As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/18/2011 6:18:00 AM

Just had to treat myself again to this rare beauty Michael... also reading my last few entries today luv.. will get back to u in a Soup Mail ..with top five.. so u can read too...Jersey Girl slipping and sliding in ice storm today..luv..

Constance La France

Date: 1/18/2011 4:59:00 AM

Only one word can describe this, Michael, "beautiful"~~~

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2011 5:27:00 PM

You have described true and lasting love in a very romantic way, Michael. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2011 5:10:00 PM

Romantically charged piece my White Knight.. full of breathtaking emotions.... so wonderfully expressed... must make hubby read this one for sure tonight... Jersey Girl appreciates great talent and creativity ... forever and always with luv luv luv..

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/17/2011 2:09:00 PM

Exceptional, Michael! Beautiful from your soul to your love. I'm sure the message to her is now clear. Thanks for the comments. Always, Annalise

James Peranteau

Date: 1/17/2011 1:55:00 PM

An excellent write dear poet ! How many ways the poet can say I love you ! great job Michael ! much love, james

Skat A

Date: 1/17/2011 1:21:00 PM

sweet one Michael. I guess what we think is broken, is really unbreakable. My thoughts are on forgiving and forever.. take care~skat