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Unbreakable

I've tasted your love
I have tasted all your pain
your mine all the same

you have climbed in me
your soft hands held my soul
I'm yours forever

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Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2011 at 3:06 PM

Another one of yours I missed. many romantic ones on your list!!

Wilma Neels

January 21, 2011 at 5:43 AM

So much beauty and promise in this senryu.. Love it (",) W

Gert W. Knop

January 20, 2011 at 6:40 AM

Very emotional and well written Senryus, my friend Michael! And thank you for your kind comment on ma Haiku-win! Have a nice day!...Gert

Nette Onclaud

January 20, 2011 at 6:18 AM

you make a sentimental fool of me, michael! wonderful love colors in this piece! :) huggs, nette

Christine A Kysely

January 19, 2011 at 2:38 PM

Wonderful and Beautiful!!! Christine

Debbie Guzzi

January 19, 2011 at 2:19 PM

wonderful short verse! revealing a true sweet heart. Light & Love

Sharon Ruebel

January 18, 2011 at 1:32 PM

Hello Michael, This could only be written by someone who is deeply in love. Beautiful, just beautiful! As Always, Shar

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 18, 2011 at 6:18 AM

Just had to treat myself again to this rare beauty Michael... also reading my last few entries today luv.. will get back to u in a Soup Mail ..with top five.. so u can read too...Jersey Girl slipping and sliding in ice storm today..luv..

Constance La France

January 18, 2011 at 4:59 AM

Only one word can describe this, Michael, "beautiful"~~~

Carolyn Devonshire

January 17, 2011 at 5:27 PM

You have described true and lasting love in a very romantic way, Michael. Beautiful! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 17, 2011 at 5:10 PM

Romantically charged piece my White Knight.. full of breathtaking emotions.... so wonderfully expressed... must make hubby read this one for sure tonight... Jersey Girl appreciates great talent and creativity ... forever and always with luv luv luv..