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Unborn Tomorrows

Unborn tomorrows.. Disguise unknown sorrows Leaving hearts full.. Not empty and hollow Unborn tomorrows.. Always send a rainbow smile After dark clouds.. Have had their while Unborn tomorrows.. Leave room for dreams to grow Even ones forgotten.. So long ago Unborn tomorrows.. Give all a second chance To rekindle.. Lost romance Unborn tomorrows.. Provide opportunity to say thank you I love you.. And appreciate all you do Unborn tomorrows.. Give a chance to say I'm sorry I acted that way.. I don't always mean everything I say Unborn tomorrows.. Are like life itself Breathe in and out.. Nothing else Just assuming the next one will come Until the last one and then it's done.. So breathe deep and let it go.. If tomorrow doesn't come, you'll never know.. For God is love.... ©Donna Jones * I heard the phrase unborn tomorrow a long long time ago on an old western show when I was a kid..I thought it was beautiful and still do...

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/11/2014 9:24:00 AM

I so enjoyed reading this one again. Good morning Donna.

Donna Jones
Date: 3/12/2014 10:46:00 PM

Good evening Richard....and thanks..

James Horn

Date: 10/7/2013 7:01:00 AM

Yes. It is a very nice enthusiastic poem simple in design yet very enjoyable and appreciative. I am learning a lot from PoetrySoup and all of its great poem designers.

Skat A

Date: 7/1/2013 10:07:00 PM

DONNA, this is a nice winning poem in PD's contest. <3 SKAT <3

John Posey

Date: 6/30/2013 6:36:00 PM

My unborn tomorrows may ne'er be as sweet - as all of my yesterdays spent at your feet -- day after tomorrow, the road I have trod - will have been determined by Almighty God.....Nice tag or title you carried through the years, sweetheart. I really enjoyed your winning entry... Love ya ... Jake

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/28/2013 7:45:00 PM

Great message of encouragement, congratulations.

Connie Gildersleeve

Date: 6/28/2013 2:24:00 PM

Donna this is a fabulous message. Congratulations on your fine win. Warm Smiles, Connie

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/27/2013 2:24:00 PM

Congrats, MD. You deserve it with this beautiful and uplifting write. Hugs

Carol Eastman

Date: 6/27/2013 12:25:00 PM

An AMAZING poem. Congratulations on your win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/26/2013 5:59:00 PM

Beautiful! Congratulations on your win and thank you for reading mine. Love, Annalise

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:37:00 PM

My pleasure....Annalise. and thank you..

Joseph May

Date: 6/26/2013 4:40:00 PM

beautiful write Donna....congrats on your win

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:36:00 PM

Thanks Joseph.....:-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2013 4:17:00 PM

Hello Donna, i love the poem so much... I had to comment without a congratulations paste... 2 tell U that your poems means a lot to me... God Is Love, and everything about your poem, felt as if I was reliving my daughters past. I wish we knew what the morrows holds... why must everyday be a step closer to an unborn future. I'm glad we live moments and breath the moments we do have... xox~ CONGRATULATIONS!!! LINDA

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:34:00 PM

Hi Linda...the age old question....I wish I knew...I want to thank you for sponsoring this inspiring contest and for the honor I feel..I remember once my grandma told me if we didn't have sorrows or uncertainty, we wouldn't need God....or faith. Thanks again Linda .this means a lot to me

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/26/2013 3:39:00 PM

congrats Donna I always liked this one Shadow x smiles

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:27:00 PM

I love your work, and your name....:-)

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:25:00 PM

Thanks sweetie..

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/26/2013 2:16:00 PM

I agree.....the phrase "unborn tomorrows" holds so much beauty and promise! Such a nice poem!! Congratulations!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:23:00 PM

Appreciate your smile Carrie ...always

John Ginesi

Date: 6/22/2013 11:35:00 PM

Hi Donna, You are really good at this aren't you, you tell it well in your poems, you have made me a fan of your works, all the best. John

Donna Jones
Date: 6/26/2013 9:17:00 PM

Thank you sir...very much

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/22/2013 5:24:00 PM

wow, I am with Karen down here. You are coming up with some pretty amazing poetry. Keep them coming, Donna. This one is so good!!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 8:05:00 PM

Too kind of you Andrea....thanks...:-)

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/22/2013 1:43:00 PM

WOW... love the 'unborn tomorrow' theme and the fine crafting of this poem. I'm glad the inspiration from the phrase you heard in an old western finally came out on the page. I see it on the Top 100 Recent list :)

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 7:54:00 PM

Karen so kind of you to take time for me...as I know I've been very lacking of late...thank you so much....I don't know what this top 100 list is though but thanks...I'm going to have to find time to learn more about things..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/20/2013 3:15:00 PM

a poetic gem with sentiments brewing in a most splendid way... amazing, donns... wow factor!..:) huggs

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 7:52:00 PM

Nette. You again make me smile....thank you

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/20/2013 2:30:00 PM

I agree Donna and it puts a different view over there is the feeling always time if you care enough. Sadly life can take other turns and leaves you wishing you had said so many things. SUPERB poem Shadow x smiles

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 7:51:00 PM

Very sweet Shadow....thank you...I also love your work...

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/20/2013 4:59:00 AM

It is a good phrase to go with in a poem or other writings..Enjoyed reading your version of the phrase..I hope that you have many happy unborn tomorrows to share your poetry with us and I many to read them..Thanks for your visits..Things are about to get back to normal abnormal..Sara

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 7:41:00 PM

So glad your days are returning to at least routine Sara..thank you for stopping

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/19/2013 8:33:00 PM

This brings the light of hope to all those who wish love will last forever(as if it doesn't anyway)...for if tomorrow never comes, today lasts for all eternity...so you must love today as if tomorrow will never get here, you might just get stuck with today! This is such a tremendous write my friend! I really loved reading this one this evening! What a lovely piece, Great Work!!

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 7:37:00 PM

Russell your comments always are so uplifting..thank you

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/19/2013 7:16:00 PM

This is truly lovely. Also thanks for your sensitive and thoughtfull comment today. You are a sweetheart.

Donna Jones
Date: 6/22/2013 7:36:00 PM

Thanks Richard...I see Becca is back mostly because ofyyou I believe....and your kind friendship to us all

Tim Ryerson

Date: 6/19/2013 3:56:00 PM

'If tomorrow doesn't come, you'll never know'...Never thought of it that way but how true it is!...Wonderful wisdom and insight shown here, Donna - Tim

Donna Jones
Date: 6/19/2013 4:46:00 PM

I so appreciate your kind words Tim..thank you...