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Unborn Baby's Dream

Warm and safe inside my Mom I love to hear her sing, The song soothes my soul and helps me to sleep. Although I am small I can produce such strong emotion, Already I make others think of things other than themselves, No stronger bond can be produced than a mother and child, Decisions of whether to have me or not can hold such fury, In the end, the decisions are made out of a strong love. People judge what is right or wrong but should stay quiet. I need a home with unconditional love, one that will make me a part of their life, one that will keep me safe, one that help me grow to be a good person, and one that will allow me to be open and understanding of all aspects of life including anyone’s decisions about the right to life. I need to be loved as no other, by a family who truly cares and wants me. My dream is for all unborn children to have this gift. To be born into a life of hate, violence, illness, drugs and disregard would never happen - in my dreams.
Written October 2, 2012 For the Scribe’s Contest “Unborn Babies Dreams”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/18/2012 3:01:00 AM
lee, hats off and congrats... well deserved with huggs!..:)
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Date: 10/17/2012 10:05:00 PM
My hearty congratulations on your win my dear friend, Lee! hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/16/2012 12:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Lee. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/15/2012 12:00:00 PM
Many congrats Lee on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/15/2012 11:13:00 AM
If only, if only..[sigh] Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
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Date: 10/15/2012 2:48:00 AM
very nicely written....congrats on ur win...:)
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Date: 10/14/2012 8:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win friend Lee. Hugs! I like your awesome poem. hugs! **Maria**
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Date: 10/14/2012 7:33:00 PM
LEE, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD
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Date: 10/14/2012 6:40:00 PM
All babies have the right to be born into a loving home. Let it be so. Great win, Lee. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/14/2012 4:14:00 PM
CONGRATS LEE ON A SPECTACULAR WRITE AND WIN LUV .. ELEGANT PERFECTION ..
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Date: 10/14/2012 11:33:00 AM
Hey Lee! I love how you've made the unborn child envision a beautiful world for all the children. Congrats!
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Date: 10/14/2012 10:31:00 AM
congrats on your win Lee...nice write
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Date: 10/3/2012 3:33:00 PM
Such a difficult topic!I wish we lived in a world where all babies had food, clothes, a roof, free health care and education!!Light & Love
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:30:00 PM
that's a very lovely expressed story poem.I enjoyed reading it.God bles you.'Erich
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Date: 10/3/2012 12:02:00 PM
Great topic that the Scribe has chosen to have for a contest..Your masterful work reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading..If only all babies could be born into a home where there is love and understanding..Thanks for dropping by my blog..Still not feeling the greatest but at least the spinning has stopped..Sara
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Lee Ramage
Date: 10/3/2012 12:49:00 PM
Glad to hear you are feeling better... be careful, it can return now with each cold/sinusitis you get... warning, keep the Antivert handy! Lee
Date: 10/3/2012 10:12:00 AM
very creative poem friend Lee. I like it...all unborn babies dream to have a better life..it depends on the parents on how they shapes their child..Good day!!
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