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Unborn and Dreaming

a beat... a thump..thump..thumping. swishing of the wind.. and a beat... the constant drums and rushing winds and i do not know anything else just the thump.. thump.. thumping... of that beat...

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/16/2012 12:42:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Unborn Babies Dream" contest Jezabella. Love, Carol

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/15/2012 12:15:00 PM

Many congrats Jezabella on winning the contest, "Unborn babies dream" by Linton. Best wishes - Hitendra Mehta

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/15/2012 9:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your Win friend Jezabella..Cheers!!

Lee Ramage

Date: 10/14/2012 7:59:00 PM

oh this was really neat, what a baby hears inside the womb, neat take Lee

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/14/2012 7:39:00 PM

JEZABELLA, congratulations with your deep and wonderful win in THE SCRIBE'S "Unborn Babies Dream" contest. Have yourself a good night~ PD

Goran Rahim

Date: 10/6/2012 11:25:00 AM

i feel the sound of music in this poem, very nicely written. great job