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Unblemished Paper

Vowels stir in the back of your mind, yet consonants lack a foundation. And the page taunts, with its virgin white, while doldrums morph into frustration. Ideas trip over each other, unable to realign anew. And sparks of inspiration get doused by sweat, trying to salvage a few. Your pen is poised just above the page; wit dangling tauntingly from its tip. And as blood and ink drip and mingle, you realize you've bitten your lip. It feels like your muse abandoned you, as thoughts vanish like wisps of vapor. For all that you can do is sit there; and stare at that unblemished paper.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/4/2018 10:19:00 PM
A gem about writer's block. I love this part most "And as blood and ink drip and mingle you find that you’ve bitten your lip." Well done, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/5/2018 9:29:00 AM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/29/2015 7:23:00 PM
A beautifully worded poem, Emile. I could see or feel a writers block blending with the blood.
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Date: 3/30/2015 9:18:00 AM
Thanks Ralph, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 3/24/2015 8:57:00 AM
I've been there so many times; well penned.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/24/2015 11:46:00 AM
Thanks so much for your generous support. Emile.
Date: 3/23/2015 7:38:00 PM
Loved this, Emile. I can relate so well. Many of my poems are mixed with the blood of my heart. Hugs
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/23/2015 8:37:00 PM
Thanks Jade, I appreciate your kind words. Emile.
Date: 3/23/2015 10:24:00 AM
Ah you need to learn to blither! Try a few BLITZ poems they really get the juices flowing - often I can get a couple verses FROM one blitz! Emile this is a very evocative verse, it might be a wee bit stronger if you even out the syllable count? Bring it out to 10 and see how it sounds? Light & Love
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/23/2015 10:51:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your input. Emile.

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