Unblemished Moon

washing your hands
in 
this holy water
shall 
not leave
a blemish
upon 
the
sweet unblemished moon
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 5:50 AM
really great imagery Gregory...with intriguing hidden meaning that i still have to decipher...^_^v
Culverhouse Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 6:02 PM
funny moon write!
Mehta Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 5:55 AM
A nice thought on unblemished moon with nice images
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