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Unbetrothed

Vows are binding promises each partner makes to God. 
Til post-traumatic stress disorder shows its ugly head  ~Quote by poet

No longer they were joined as one
The swell of her shackled ankle has gone
All that is left is hurt, two hearts disheveled
Cutting the ties so coarse mideviled

They danced together to the cante jondo
Romanced by guitars, baile the fandango
A thousand times they talked about tyng the ribbon
Fear and violent behavior, thoughts never given

The wind is the singer who sang the first song
Vibrant is she who sings her windsong
He'll find his way, without strife, she'll not be battered
Wars only make dreams of casalena shattered

The kind thoughtful man with whom she'd been engaged
Returned from battle laden with a vile bitterness he enraged
Drained dry of the milk of life's humanity
Now inflamed with a blind raging insanity

To a true prince she had vowed to wed
Transformed into a dastardly beast instead
As the man she loved pounds fists into the wall
She proclaims in God's name, I am now unbetrothed
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Kauffman Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 11:51 AM
Heartbreaking, Anaya! PTSD has stolen many a person and robbed them of who they were. Your poem, your choice of words and images powerfully tells the story of romance and love and devastation! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Anaya Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Thank you, Sam! Cheers!
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2023 at 11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great win ... love the end, Anaya :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
March 13, 2024 at 11:23 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise! Hugs
Narain Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Nice poem Anaya. It is a sad story with better outcome.
Anaya Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Thank you, Jay!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 9:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful yet sad write. Great pictures. I enjoyed reading it. Have a great day.............
Anaya Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 3:19 PM
Thank you so much for your comments and encouragement, Paula. I'm glad you enjoyed!
Hamilton Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 7:37 AM
First time reading you Anaya, it was sad, but had a happy outcome in the end. War has taken it's toll on many a man and the consequences to their families are devastating. Well written.
Anaya Avatar
August 14, 2023 at 8:26 AM
It's complicated, with new technology and self help, for instance writing we can all do our share to help vets. Thank you, John Hamilton.
Situation Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 3:53 PM
It means your parents gave you away. should have been unengaged. I liked it.
Anaya Avatar
August 13, 2023 at 4:16 PM
Thank you.
Rolland Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 2:57 PM
beautiful poem, the difficult "story" touched me, thanks for sharing
Anaya Avatar
August 12, 2023 at 8:24 PM
Thank you, Yann. I've never put a poem together as quickly as this one. PS power poets, I call them, (means awesome) I can't keep up with them!;D
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