Unbelieving Eyes

you wrote this a little while ago,, wow still prevalent today...glad i came.... going away for a while see you when i get back....

emmm...beautiful...i like it

Congrats my friend on a wonderful win.. luv and hugs Michael

You described it perfectly. Many congratulations to you, Andrea : )

congrats on your win cory

Well described Andrea. Congratulations

My favorite Alliteration line "and an ashen aftermath" Congratulations on your 8th Place win my friend. CR

A great one Andrea,,, very hard to accept as well... thank you for sharing,..p.d.

Congratulations on your win. I'll say unbelieving eyes, I remember standing in the library of our hospital with all Senior Mgment watching in utter pain, the towers fall. The world mourned with you. Take care Lee

beautifully worded, andie... soup errors again so i'll make this brief.. whoot!..sunniest congrats on your special win :) huggs

Many unbelieving eyes Andrea. Congratulations on your worthy poetry entry. Agape, Moses

Congrats on your win, Andrea! Kim

Congratulations on the win in the contest of Carolyn, Andrea

congratulations on your win andrea! i was definitely one of those unbelieving eyes at first! maybe we all were. such a tragedy! your poem really captures the shock of it all.

Congrats on this 8th.place win Andrea it was terrific and we will never forget those images thanks for my congrats also.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Congrats Andrea on your wonderful win with these excellent words depicting 9/11 my friend..luv..

Congratulations Andrea. A worthy win. Love, joyce

Andrea congrats on your win..David

Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea. Love, Carol

Andrea, there was definitely a sense of disbelief that such a tragedy could occur on American soil and the despair continued as people searched for loved ones, clinging to hope in the aftermath. Congratulations on your win! There were many great entries, so take pride in your achievement. Love, Carolyn

Yes, this one hits the nail right on the head, my friend. A winner for sure

Yes we all felt that disorentation i think Andrea, that and in my case many insights passages of scripture and a great sobering of my character...a sad sad day..

Ten years later and it's still not real. How can we imagine just how we feel. The evil inside of our fellow man. Leaves us to deal with what ever we can.

it was a horrible tragedy and we all could not believe what we were seeing. Your poem says it all. I have not been on line today so just stopped in for a moment and now making supper so got to run. love phyl

Yes, that's what sticks in mind, that heap of ashes, the horrible aftermath. Love, daver