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Unbearable Weight

unsustainable lightness of empty life, it's unbearable weight

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Date: 6/22/2022 8:45:00 PM

...reading again. I see why it is on my favorites list. Take care Alkas

Date: 5/3/2021 4:47:00 PM

food for thought ~ well done, Alkas

Date: 1/18/2021 11:01:00 AM

Excellent monoku Alkas! This is resonating. I love reading poems that just leave me with "wow!" Awesomeness Alkas :)

Alkas Poetry
Date: 1/18/2021 12:23:00 PM

Thank you Very much dear, you are a Very kind person, salute alkas

Date: 1/16/2021 12:12:00 PM

Hello Alaka, this makes sense to me. A lot of people have a empty life. They do not know what to do to fulfill it. Salute Darlene.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/18/2021 4:06:00 PM

Hello Alakas, Perfection! Your welcome. Salute, Darlene

Alkas Poetry
Date: 1/18/2021 12:24:00 PM

Perfection dear, i thank you for commenting...salute alkas

Date: 1/15/2021 5:19:00 PM

A deep heartfelt in this amazing line. Great monoku!

Alkas Poetry
Date: 1/16/2021 3:03:00 AM

Thank you dear Akkina so kind of yours commenting grand salute alkas