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Anacreontic verse Unaware Little cat you wander free without a single thought of me. You know not of the ills in store for silly cats in the outdoor. The eagles swoops to lift you high and carry you up in the sky. He drops you and you run away, still thinking it's a form of play. You try to evade my loving grasp. You struggle enough to make me gasp. If only I could make you see you're better off at home with me. There are hungry creatures out here, who would turn you into kitty stew. So please don't wiggle to be free. You're only safe at home with me. Written November 8, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 1/14/2016 11:19:00 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 11/21/2015 4:06:00 PM
yes, such truth, my friend - I hope your kitty listens to you!! Hope you're feeling well again and having a good week xx
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Date: 11/20/2015 9:24:00 PM
I really like this, Joyce! I like how you incorporated rhyme into your work. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 11/20/2015 3:19:00 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:12:00 PM
I wrote about a cat too Joyce - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:23:00 AM
Cute write Joyce, you made me smile.
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Date: 11/19/2015 2:29:00 AM
a different take on the theme-- love the cat story, joyce.. super congrats and huggs
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Date: 11/18/2015 8:12:00 PM
Joyce, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/18/2015 7:41:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win Joyce!! -LU xxx *smiles*
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Date: 11/18/2015 6:19:00 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
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Date: 11/14/2015 11:45:00 AM
your sweet, caring ways for kitties shine through this lovely piece, joyce... much enjoyed!..huggs
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