Unaware

Anacreontic verse
Unaware

Little cat
you wander free
without a single 
thought of me.
You know not of
the ills in store
for silly cats
in the outdoor.
The eagles swoops
to lift you high
and carry you 
up in the sky.
He drops you and
you run away,
still thinking it's
a form of play.
You try to evade
my loving grasp.
You struggle enough
to make me gasp.
If only I 
could make you see
you're better off
at home with me.
There are hungry
creatures out here, who
would turn you 
into kitty stew.
So please don't wiggle
to be free.
You're only safe
at home with me.

Written November 8, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
January 14, 2016 at 11:19 AM
#7 truly underrates this magnificent piece.. Absolutely brilliant
Horne Avatar
November 21, 2015 at 4:06 PM
yes, such truth, my friend - I hope your kitty listens to you!! Hope you're feeling well again and having a good week xx
Merryman Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 9:24 PM
I really like this, Joyce! I like how you incorporated rhyme into your work. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Anacreontic verse a new adventure for most of us but this winner will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara
Allison Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 5:12 PM
I wrote about a cat too Joyce - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Inman Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 8:23 AM
Cute write Joyce, you made me smile.
Onclaud Avatar
November 19, 2015 at 2:29 AM
a different take on the theme-- love the cat story, joyce.. super congrats and huggs
A  Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 8:12 PM
Joyce, Congratulations in Edward Ebbs, AV1 Contest. HUGS **SKAT**
Negron Flores Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 7:41 PM
Congratulations Joyce
Scars Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 6:42 PM
Congrats on your win Joyce!! -LU xxx *smiles*
Ebbs Avatar
November 18, 2015 at 6:19 PM
I am happy with all the enteries, congratulations on your well deserved win...thank you for participating!
Onclaud Avatar
November 14, 2015 at 11:45 AM
your sweet, caring ways for kitties shine through this lovely piece, joyce... much enjoyed!..huggs
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