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This or That, Vol 21 Contest     October 27, 2023

       Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

Unassailable Purity

Nobody is more dangerous than he who imagines himself pure in heart, for his purity, by definition, is unassailable.  ~Author James Baldwin

Humans drown themselves in ego by thinking they're worth
the honorable title, "I am among the innocent upon earth."
There has been no human born since Jesus, of pure divinity
His life was never sullied, nor blemished by corruptibility

Angels sang of His innocence, chaste and immaculate virtue
for men of all nations give way to temptations. This is true
We are flawed with faults. Underserving the seat on a throne
To claim we have untainted rectitude, I could never condone

Unassailable purity is not a phrase any human can live up to.
If one thinks he has irreproachable decency, don't misconstrue
such a self-centered thought as one of the meek and humble
The pure of heart has impeccable integrity and will not stumble

One who believes he's great is one I would chide and berate
for that one hungers for power and glory that he will never sate
Insidious, the hypocrite who claims innocence. He will find grief
in assuming he is sacrosanct, for that would be a profane belief
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Alex Avatar
November 10, 2023 at 4:49 AM
Giving a definition of purity through the beautiful quotation, you have brought out a grand masterpiece. Congratulations!
Ibeh Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 8:04 PM
Lin, this is such a superb, spiritual poem with amazing imagery. I love the first line, and it couldn't be more true! Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest.
Narain Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 9:57 AM
Nice spiritual poem.
Lane Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 11:20 AM
Many thanks for leaving me your thoughts, Jay.
Jones Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 8:26 AM
What a intellectual stimulating poem. Loved how you put this together. Good Luck for the contest. Have a great weekend Lin.
Lane Avatar
October 27, 2023 at 9:00 AM
Thanks for making me out to be intellectual, Karen. Lol thanks for being kind and I’ll wish you a wonderful weekend as well.
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