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Unassailable Purity

When accidental auroras stroll along the pale highlights of camouflaging corpses and death blossoms in vulturous hearts of dreadful puppets, she always holds pixie dusts of strawberry seeds within october's obsidian quartz. Gaze beyond those glass-stitched horizons, as she cracks the carmine cocoon of judgemental juxtapositions and transforms carbon-coated milliseconds to magenta-gold pronunciation of peaceful phrases. She is a silken cream-dove, floating above murky musings of redolent rhinestone- reveries. As prismatic primroses shall cleanse every sin from the witching spellbook, she will waltz in whispering lulls of liberty, emancipating from chloroform-stained chains of blood- scented blames. Her sunflower-shield and aurous summer-sword of amber poesy can slice spicy silhouettes of graphite goblins, she will never surrender to those misinterpreting megalomaniac minds, who twirl along masquerading rivulets of manipulative assumptions. She is the shiniest roar above grimoires of grief, like an 'unassailable purity', washing away emerald exhales of pain, who mutes each cosmic raven's lament and distils russet-white-lilies with her alchemical aroma.

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Date: 11/10/2023 4:20:00 AM
"washing away emerald exhales of pain" - your poetic language, as I had already expressed a couple of times earlier, is flowery, fine, and fantastic. This work is a great one. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/9/2023 11:54:00 AM
Hiya, this is absolutely brilliant! You're a poet of depth and intelligence. I loved this! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Date: 10/29/2023 11:59:00 PM
Your imagery is exquisite, and your words flow smoothly with a nice consistent rhythm. Surely it is harder to create than you make it seem, Hiya. Your last verse is encouraging and offers a possible solution to the challenges faced. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
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Date: 10/29/2023 11:21:00 AM
What can I say that isn't written by many admirers of your exquisite lexicon? A wonderful meditation on transformation and poetical resistance. Bravo.
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Date: 10/28/2023 10:56:00 AM
You write emotions so well... an insight into your life which seems to be full of angst.. this is wonderful poem for the contest with great use of metaphors.. The adjectives you choose to emphasise your feelings are excellent... so man wonderful lines here.. but it is the end that I like ths most.. the last stanza is poetic briliance..
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Date: 10/26/2023 3:20:00 PM
Extremely descriptive writing, Hiya. I particularly enjoyed the imagery in verse two.
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Date: 10/25/2023 12:45:00 PM
She is a silken cream-dove, floating above murky musings of redolent rhinestone-reveries---Her sunflower-shield and aurous summer-sword of amber poesy can slice spicy silhouettes of graphite goblins-- wonderfully descriptive, Hiya. Splendidly done, as always.
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Date: 10/24/2023 8:11:00 PM
I loved the magical roll of this poem. I felt as though I was lifted to a mythical place above the clouds.
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Date: 10/24/2023 1:48:00 PM
an absolutely exquisite poem, Hiya. Your level of skill is brilliant. Your words touched me in an inexplicable manner. Perhaps it was the purity in your words, your imagery, and the unfolding of the story. The end speaks to hope enveloped in purity. I believe this poem was a true work of art. I'll be faving it. Best wishes in the contest. This is an extraordinary creation! have a pleasant evening, Sara
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Date: 10/24/2023 11:56:00 AM
Your poetry is so sophisticated that it blows my mind. The inclusion of alliteration, metaphor, and imagery raises it to a truly exceptional height. Your word choice shows your outstanding skill as a poet. Your syntax is excellent, and your ideas are concise. The poem as a whole is exquisite, and your words have the power to conjure up vivid mental images and powerful sensations in the minds of your readers. Dear Hiya, your poem is full of heart and spirit. Best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 10/24/2023 11:29:00 AM
After a long day of bla bla, i get on to read this brilliant and deep write and i feel like i see me in this poem. I can resonate on so many levels, especially being surrounded by megalomaniacs, with manipulative tactics, this hits home! I love the alliterations and the imagery and descriptive diction as always and the way you’ve used metaphors too is beyond impeccable! The opening lines really drew me in and made me go whoa! Especially how you’ve written “ vulturous hearts of dreadful-
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Date: 10/24/2023 11:31:00 AM
And “ She is the shiniest roar above grimoires of grief, like an 'unassailable purity', ” awwn made me tear up! You really are a sweet heart! Really! What would i do without your empathy and kindness! Truly this made me feel so much and i cant help but be in awe also cus of how soulfully artistic this is! Absolutely love this! Thank you! Top winner for sure
Date: 10/24/2023 11:21:00 AM
Alliteration, metaphors and imagery make this a poem of grand status. Wonderful diction too. You are truly a great poet. Blessings.
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