Unanswered

Unanswered 
Feeling abandoned 
 
while in his presence 
years of absentee love 
Thoughts wrestling with reasons 
for feeling the detachment or delay 
of what should come naturally, paternally, 
These things you have confided 
with eyes cried out and thirsty 
your soul saturated with tears of its own 
My heart cries for yours that is conflicted 
loving and resenting the one 
from whom you seek validation and attention 
and pray for its peace. 




-Laura P.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Pettit Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 1:03 PM
This first work of yours I've read makes me want to check out more of your work.
Pugh Avatar
December 30, 2025 at 2:32 PM
Thank you
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