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~ you winked at me, then sighed your last breath ... where went ... that shining gaze? ~ ~ 2nd Place ~ in the "Get In Touch With Your Zen" Poetry Contest, Richard Lamoureux, Judge & Sponsor.

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 11/13/2019 3:01:00 PM

Congratulations x

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/13/2019 5:27:00 PM

Thank you so much, Elaine! :o) <3

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2019 6:31:00 AM

Wow, Greg! Indeed the eye is extinguished at death...yes, the soul lives on in eternity but the body is left without light. Congratulations! <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:31:00 PM

Very much so, Kim, and well-said, my friend. Thank you so much for the kind words - blessings! :o) <3

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2019 8:03:00 PM

HI, buddy. Congrats for your win. I hope you are doing ok since what happened this week.

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:30:00 PM

Thank you very much, Andrea, I hope things are good for you. I will write something more personal soon ... just wandering the darkness. Miss our "chats". Blessings, Buddy. :o) <3

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/1/2019 2:15:00 PM

- Congratulations on your great "Zen" line, Gregory :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:29:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Anne-Lise - the same to you, Dear Poet! Blessings! :o) <3

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/1/2019 8:50:00 AM

Thanks for adding your zen to my contest. ;0)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 11/3/2019 8:28:00 PM

Many kind thanks to you, Richard ... I so greatly appreciate my placement and your kind comments. This was a fun new form for me. Blessings! :o)