Unadorned

Naked, skeletal, the forest shivers.
Bark thickening in the wily wind.
Unadorned the trees slumber on.
Their limbs seeming to fight off the
onslaught of nightmarish Winter.

Twig tips claw avengingly at the sky
and rake torn nails across windowpanes.
Slumber soothes not the dreamer
who waits in a frenzy of anguish 
for the kind covering of snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/18/2011 5:12:00 AM
A beautiful poem, short, sweet, and appealing with easy stanzas and lines under 10 syllables each. An overall excellent poem. PS....I get it, I'm not entirely daft...just shy.
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Date: 11/17/2009 5:28:00 PM
Wonderful and so descriptive and imaginative too... guess what? success on Scales of Justice.. please check and tell me u are OK with this feeble attempt of mine on Concrete poetry... thankxxx for your patience and help.. did my best, Deb!! luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 11/6/2009 5:57:00 PM
omg this poem is just wonderful! what an image you build for the reader and yes! I can hear the nails across the windowpanes in autumn. Well done my friend.
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Date: 11/5/2009 11:09:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your exceptional writing today Deborah. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/5/2009 12:06:00 AM
Congrats on you success in Constance contest Debbie & for your blog comment today.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/4/2009 11:36:00 PM
The imagery in this write will remain on my soul as I await the blanket of snow that all too soon shall cover the ground outside my window. Beautiful writing as always. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 11/4/2009 8:30:00 PM
Beautiful Personification, of forest, winter, and naked skeletal, trees slumbering. The last stanza unique"twig tips claw" "rake torn nail" waitin for the cover of snow! Awesome imagery Lady! Sincerely, Love, Moses Thanks for your gracious comment today!
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Date: 11/4/2009 5:20:00 PM
soupmail...JB
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