Unadorned

Naked, skeletal, the forest shivers.
Bark thickening in the wily wind.
Unadorned the trees slumber on.
Their limbs seeming to fight off the
onslaught of nightmarish Winter.

Twig tips claw avengingly at the sky
and rake torn nails across windowpanes.
Slumber soothes not the dreamer
who waits in a frenzy of anguish 
for the kind covering of snow.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Brumley Avatar
April 18, 2011 at 5:12 AM
A beautiful poem, short, sweet, and appealing with easy stanzas and lines under 10 syllables each. An overall excellent poem. PS....I get it, I'm not entirely daft...just shy.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 17, 2009 at 5:28 PM
Wonderful and so descriptive and imaginative too... guess what? success on Scales of Justice.. please check and tell me u are OK with this feeble attempt of mine on Concrete poetry... thankxxx for your patience and help.. did my best, Deb!! luv Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"
Gumbo Avatar
November 6, 2009 at 5:57 PM
omg this poem is just wonderful! what an image you build for the reader and yes! I can hear the nails across the windowpanes in autumn. Well done my friend.
Brown Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 11:09 AM
Thank you for sharing your exceptional writing today Deborah. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
November 5, 2009 at 12:06 AM
Congrats on you success in Constance contest Debbie & for your blog comment today.Rgds Brian
Townsend Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 11:36 PM
The imagery in this write will remain on my soul as I await the blanket of snow that all too soon shall cover the ground outside my window. Beautiful writing as always. Smiles from Lolita
Freeman Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 8:30 PM
Beautiful Personification, of forest, winter, and naked skeletal, trees slumbering. The last stanza unique"twig tips claw" "rake torn nail" waitin for the cover of snow! Awesome imagery Lady! Sincerely, Love, Moses Thanks for your gracious comment today!
Bien Avatar
November 4, 2009 at 5:20 PM
soupmail...JB
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