Unadorned

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Placed fourth in :

Unadorned, Utopia, Utterly, Uplifting Poetry Contest

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                                                Unadorned

                                Let me leave this temporal sky
                              Unadorned, unmourned, unwept;
                          Let no tears drip from cherished eyes,
                           Let no heart grieve for the bereaved;

                                  Let no grief assail any face,
                             But the lovely chants of the Lord
                                Resound in every ear apace,
                              And His name be on every lip;

                           Let me part from this worldly place
                                Unadorned, in simple attires,
                         Decked with some flowers on the face,
                              Like the commonest of mortals;

                           Let me depart from this dull sphere
                            With delightful smiles on the face
                            With composure and with no fear
                           And name of the Lord in the heart;

                            Unadorned, let my ash be spread
                          At sea, between the north and east,
                             Where the rays of the rising sun
                           On the horizon makes their feast;

                             Unadorned, let but plain rituals
                             Be carried out for the bereaved,
                           As death is the end of one`s strife
                              And the beginning of new life;

                            Unadorned, unmourned, unwept,
                              Let my grave lie under the sky;
                         Let no dear one mourn the bereaved
                               As I`m soaring up very high.
              
                                Beyond the temporal body
                                 Ever lies the eternal soul,
                            That saints and sages do reckon
                               To integrate the divine whole;

                              Adorned or unadorned, the soul
                                No pandemic can just subdue
                           And neither tempests, nor weapons
                                 Can destroy or alter its hue.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:31:00 PM
Krish, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful poem, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:36:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - Have a lovely Easter :) -
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/29/2024 7:59:00 AM
Thanks a lot poetess for my placement in your poetry contest and for appreciating my poem. Wish you equally a pleasant weekend as well as a pious and joyful Easter,
Date: 3/26/2024 9:38:00 AM
Congratulations Krishnanand! :)
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Krishnanand Guptar
Date: 3/26/2024 11:33:00 AM
Thanks Linda for visiting my page and for your compliments. Wish you a pleasant day.
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