Unacceptable

Lucy Loose was a wench unconventional
well known for doing things nonsensical.
She made a public scene
with frisky Billy Breen.
When she up and did the unmentionable.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 7:58 PM
oh oh, and she did it with the guy who hates dirty movies? hahaha
Schneiter Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 6:47 AM
No, that was BILL Breen. Sorry for the confusion.
Fiery Avatar
March 20, 2016 at 10:58 PM
Paul, i am still thinking abt Lucy Loose..lollll.I want more of this kind...you are simply brilliant....hugs red
Schneiter Avatar
April 4, 2016 at 10:57 PM
You are a sweetheart, Red, for writing those kind words to me. I have written some limericks that are similar thematically to "Unacceptable." I'll identify them for you, and I'll try to come up with some new ones. hugs x x x
Fiery Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 10:26 PM
I want to know what exactly she did...very very very nice write paul...ur Limericks are amazing !
Schneiter Avatar
March 9, 2016 at 6:34 AM
You're a sweetheart, Red, for being so kind to me. Please know I appreciate it. What did she do? Let your imagination run wild.
Irwin Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:13 PM
Nice!
Schneiter Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:31 PM
Thank you, Luke. It's thoughtful of you to stop by.
Laurie Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:13 PM
G'day Paul ... I dunno Paul. I reckon it would have been mentioned everywhere - Lindsay
Schneiter Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 9:43 PM
I get your point, Lindsay, and it's manifestly valid. Note, however, that as the author of the limerick, I chose not to mention the act.
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