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Unacceptable

Lucy Loose was a wench unconventional
well known for doing things nonsensical.
She made a public scene
with frisky Billy Breen.
When she up and did the unmentionable.

Copyright © Paul Schneiter | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/25/2016 7:58:00 PM oh oh, and she did it with the guy who hates dirty movies? hahaha Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 4/4/2016 6:47:00 AM No, that was BILL Breen. Sorry for the confusion.

Red Fiery Date: 3/20/2016 10:58:00 PM Paul, i am still thinking abt Lucy Loose..lollll.I want more of this kind...you are simply brilliant....hugs red Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 4/4/2016 10:57:00 PM You are a sweetheart, Red, for writing those kind words to me. I have written some limericks that are similar thematically to "Unacceptable." I'll identify them for you, and I'll try to come up with some new ones. hugs x x x

Red Fiery Date: 3/8/2016 10:26:00 PM I want to know what exactly she did...very very very nice write paul...ur Limericks are amazing ! Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 3/9/2016 6:34:00 AM You're a sweetheart, Red, for being so kind to me. Please know I appreciate it. What did she do? Let your imagination run wild.

Luke Irwin Date: 3/8/2016 9:13:00 PM Nice! Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 3/8/2016 9:31:00 PM Thank you, Luke. It's thoughtful of you to stop by.

Lindsay Laurie Date: 3/8/2016 9:13:00 PM G'day Paul ... I dunno Paul. I reckon it would have been mentioned everywhere - Lindsay Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 3/8/2016 9:43:00 PM I get your point, Lindsay, and it's manifestly valid. Note, however, that as the author of the limerick, I chose not to mention the act.