Un Happy

I thought blood was supposed to be 
thicker than the glass of water you drink  

But this glass of water and few pain 
medications plus a couple of stress pills 
serve its purpose 

With my body feeling numb with a lot of 
ballistic thoughts still feeling like love lost 
all over again  running thru my veins

So many negative thoughts in my mind I 
Can’t erase the image even the turbulence 
of this plane can’t change my direction

 Summer breeze feels so good outside but 
my  inner thoughts inside of me  are so 
glowing hot a blind mind can feel my 
pains

A trouble heart a trouble mind can’t depart 
from my trouble past still have lot of anger 
and my feelings are  built with gush  of 
emotional  insert in my head

You will know my deepest thoughts that 
agonizing me everyday day to day time to 
time/ My  unconscious mind it runs  tricks 
on me my/  illusion are perhaps on my 
mind is playing tricks on me once again 
time and time again "JCMT"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/16/2013 9:06:00 AM
These are true feelings that you feel. Remember that nothing lasts forever. Tomorrow is another day. Smile someone loves you... Lucilla
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Date: 10/2/2013 4:50:00 PM
I feel this one. Frustrating, disheartening.
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Date: 9/25/2013 8:10:00 PM
Sometimes it is hard to live in this crazy world. We make choices and then set them against our future. We struggle with our demons and hope every day to see some sunshine. You wrote your heart and I give you credit for that. Allan
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Date: 8/22/2013 4:12:00 AM
It's sad to read something like this, knowing very much the feeling. Sad it is, though always good to remember and connect this in essence is very deep, possibly the best thing a poem can be in my opinion. And that first line is brilliant! "I thought blood was supposed to be thicker than the glass of water you drink" Very nice poem
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Christopher Michaels
Date: 9/10/2013 12:25:00 AM
thanks, Check out my poem "Sand Castle"
Date: 8/22/2013 2:50:00 AM
- Very touching and sad written,Christopher.... - All the best to you!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Christopher Michaels
Date: 8/22/2013 3:39:00 AM
Thanks for reading Love the Reponse This is just the beginning Beginning "JCMT"
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