Un-Revelling Rivalry

Un-revelling Rivalry

Who am I to speak of historical rivalry I cannot contest
all the clever myriad truths conjectures and refutations
about the two masters the two foes with huge presence
when history acclaim appreciation is subjective personal 
up front and back stage up all artistic ins downs and outs

My parachute helicopter mind wants to give first prize to
to Leonardo for free flying inventive rebellious mind and
he helped me with anatomy dissecting corpses and all I can 
still smell fragrant formalin preserving miraculous tissues
when I had to learn those medical terms and cut into flesh

But then Michelangelo shares my middle name though I am 
no angel but who can proclaim that I may never be biased in
associate vein in quite shallow post-post-modernist anticipation
when the great man also painted in narrative personification
Deluge Drunken Noah Creation of Adam Madonna and Child

Okay family man that I am I resort to holidays with my children
and am so sad to admit that we never so far made it to Rome
sacrilegious or not but how could I pass The Last Judgement
when seeing Sistine Chapel’s altar would alter the verdict
of Ignoramus with leisure time spent on Normandy’s beaches 

Well now I recall that trip to Euro Disney when we walked
from Tour Eiffel to the Louvre where I temporarily lost my
little boy Moritz and almost my temper when the devious villain
hid from the artwork was sulking because the Mona Lisa was
so small and he was so tiny could not see amongst masses of 
tourists the smile and metaphorical writing on canvas and wall 

So in all earnest while giving a toss I could-would have to resort 
to tossing a coin in regards to whom why how and whenever the
rivals could measure up to history my history my story and life

Even and because of my whacky literal critical stance and my 
stanzas bordering on mockery heresy subtle subjectification
you must remember that I have one tongue and two cheeks

And while seemingly ridiculing an important theme of historical 
prominence I still bow in awe admiration yet lodge my own angle
perspective whereas the two grand master’s problem was not 
what I would behold in my eyes and my soul in full radiance but 
that they chose not to consider each others contrasting beauty
as compliment complement Leonardo Angelo Michel Da Vinci
 

01st September 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/19/2016 4:58:00 AM
Awesome narrative my dear friend. I love it and enjoyed. Thanks for sharing and congratulations on your win! Hugs and cheers!
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Date: 10/18/2016 7:45:00 AM
Congrats well-done great studied work x
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2016 8:38:00 AM
Thanks Wendy. And by the way, I did find Moritz and he is a body builder now. Kai
Date: 10/18/2016 7:22:00 AM
wonderful Kai, this is just great :) congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2016 8:37:00 AM
Thanks luloo.
Date: 9/10/2016 6:28:00 AM
How develishly cleverly written. I read it on the backdrop of a song playing on LM Radio and it really came home. Ok so now put your tongue into the pther cheek.
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Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 10/18/2016 8:37:00 AM
Will do and thank you Jannie.
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