Un-Red

Her profile said she’s auburn So I right swiped my phone Her hair ablaze like autumn I guess I should’ve known I've always been attracted To hair so flaming red My love must be enacted We rushed upstairs to bed She liked to leave the light on But red was not her tone The truth came out in what I call The Goldilocks Zone 6 April 2021 Contest: The Goldilocks Zone Sponsor: Anthony Biaanco

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L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/6/2021 8:45:00 PM

LOL. Those eyebrows give it away every time. LOL. Methinks The Goldilocks Zone is something else altogether, Terry. I won't keep it from you...google it. I had to.

Terry Flood
Date: 4/7/2021 1:19:00 AM

I reckon the Goldilocks zone is a fallacy. My porridge wasn’t too hot and it wasn’t too cold, yet all that was in it was a fly... and that was dead. Science? Phewey! Thanks for the ‘LOL’. Terry

Jan Allison

Date: 4/6/2021 12:00:00 PM

ha ha ha so she didnt have matching collar and cuffs , so witty Terry:-) hugs Jan xx

Terry Flood
Date: 4/6/2021 2:54:00 PM

No, no... it was the eye brows... honest your honour. Glad you enjoyed, Jan. Terry