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s p l i t t i n g headache like cracking coconuts-- water for brains

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De R

Date: 7/28/2011 8:34:00 AM

Such a great last line, 'rocks green with envy'. Your personification was amazing here and I noticed you have 5-7-5 (old style haiku). Impressive, nikko! Hugs to you, Emilia!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/4/2010 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations nikko,One well deserved win,Charma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/20/2010 5:27:00 PM

Hey, congrats on this one two, dearie!! Luv, andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/20/2010 1:54:00 AM

Congratulations Nikko, on your placement in Raul Moreno’s “Morning Ambiance” contest. Way to go! Sincerely, Dane Ann

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 2/19/2010 10:29:00 AM

Congratulations on a wonderful Haiku and your win, well deserved. Caryl

Carrie Richards

Date: 2/19/2010 8:19:00 AM

A wonderful haiku, Nikko....and well deserving a win in Raul's contest! ~ Great job! ~ Carrie

Marty Owens

Date: 2/19/2010 6:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...Nice haiku...enjoyed...Marty

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/19/2010 6:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest (Morning Ambiance) Nikko. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/19/2010 4:31:00 AM

A hearty congrats to u Nikko on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. a most excellent description of the photo and a wonderful win for a wonderful poet and his gifted pen ..luv.. Linda-Marie..

Nick Bagnall

Date: 2/19/2010 4:23:00 AM

Love the personification - well done in the competition

Raul Moreno

Date: 2/18/2010 9:42:00 PM

Nikko, congrats in your placement in my contest...Raul

Skat A

Date: 2/18/2010 7:10:00 PM

I LOVE JEALOUSY. THE GARDEN OF MY EYE....ENJOY READING...

Date: 2/17/2010 3:31:00 PM

Interesting and unique perspective on the picture. Nice use of personification. Good luck in the contest. Keep on writing! Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/16/2010 6:40:00 AM

Nikko, I love how this reads very much like a real haiku, of the modern variety, though written with traditional syllable count, someting I find unsual here at Soup since today the haiku writers don't prefer the old style. I think (and hope) you should do well in the contest. Now I need to do that blog thing, but I will see anything else new of yours later. So glad you liked my prayer poem. It's also for SOup contest.LUv ya, andrea

Susan Palli

Date: 2/16/2010 3:59:00 AM

loved it. thanks