Umm6

*6 syllables* Umm... Wait a moment... Umm... Let me think for a time... I hate that I love you... You think this is sublime? Well, let me tell you this: I hate you-you-you're decisions Umm... Wait, I shouldn't have said that... Umm...

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 7/30/2013 10:43:00 AM

Funny how inspiration comes to us. Burning bridges is as you note not such a good thing. Not doing it doesn't mean we have to cross it.

Heather Secrest

Date: 7/28/2013 4:17:00 PM

I always have ummm moments when I really shouldn't have said whatever I just said! I can relate! Don't dump on yourself! I liked it! -Heather

J.W. Earnings

Date: 7/22/2013 3:58:00 PM

well...I saw a CAPTCHA preview say UMM6, so I got inspired to write this poem with 6 syllables...hope you like it...hopefully (this one's my worst one...I know it hah)