Umbrella

Sun is out of sight Clouds are out to get me The day has just begun But the weather will be nasty The only thing that gives me hope Is my poka-dot umbrella It keeps me safe from threatening rain It keeps me dry and toasty

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Paul Callus

Date: 5/1/2014 4:09:00 PM

Love this polka-dot umbrella...reminds me of a polka-dot teeny weeny bikini (back in time!) // paul

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/4/2014 9:18:00 PM

A sweet write, Jolie! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2014 3:53:00 PM

Way to go with this winning work..Congrats..Sara

Skat A

Date: 4/3/2014 10:28:00 PM

JOLIE, congrats on your AWESOME win. .. Luv ~SKAT~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/3/2014 5:04:00 AM

My congratulations for writing this lovely poem, enjoyed it, jolie

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/2/2014 11:49:00 PM

HI, JOLIE, Congratulations, the poem is awesome. Enjoyed your winning poem. GOOD NIGHT, luv LINDA

Jolie Girl

Date: 4/2/2014 5:22:00 PM

Thank you all for your sweet words !

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/2/2014 4:07:00 PM

Polka dots! Great idea...congrats. BG

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/2/2014 11:23:00 AM

- Hey Jolie - Congratulations on your win in "Umbrella" contest Sponsor Leonora Galinta - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 4/2/2014 10:58:00 AM

My warm and hearty congratulations on this brilliant piece and win my dear friend Jolie! Thank u so much for your loving support. More blessings! Biggest hugs! Love lots always, Leonora

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/26/2014 2:06:00 PM

I cant seem to come up with anything for this contest..I love your polka dot poem. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/26/2014 12:28:00 AM

what a sweet little umbrella poem and with polka dots!!