Um Bread

Make it cold and bake it hot Fresh baked bread delights Fresh from the oven buttered Senses dance a reel Happy palate sings My tummy Smiles!

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/12/2018 8:47:00 PM

Happy palate indeed! I am craving hot buttery bread right now, I am glad the stores are 25 miles away.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/13/2018 10:03:00 AM

I keep flour handy so that I can whip up a batch when I need to. Love especially baking Irish Soda Bread. Go on, go get you some freshly baked bread. Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2018 7:36:00 PM

very nice! If it is for the contest, that one needs to be like a haiku: 5/3/5. Otherwise, this is just GREAT!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/13/2018 10:02:00 AM

No, not necessarily for the contest; I just penned it after baking some fresh biscuits. But thanks, Andrea.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/12/2018 4:06:00 PM

Yes, 'fresh baked bread delights' exactly, makes my tummy smile too!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/13/2018 10:01:00 AM

And the house smells wonderful for quite awhile. Thanks again.