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Ultimate Unrequitedness

Ultimate Unrequitedness ________________________________________ Before we met in the flesh We waltzed with words on a website for dating, A mating dance for a modern world We clicked online and off Profiles made for blending Amending our previous life errors For two forty-something's Fortunate to find old fashioned love Above anything they'd experienced 'til now We found common ground In our un-common past At last, for two, the one. Optimistic for our coupling A future uncertain yet sure His and hers' mature gift. She died on a Thursday Slain by an off springs hand, who emptied The sand of her life's timer. Our non-existent plans shattered By a sick boys' mind Find it hard to blame the illness, not the child. What becomes of loves' chemistry when one element is no more, Torn from the noble bond. Surviving this trauma Does the partner left as one Become the ultimate unrequited lover. Dwelling on the promise Unfulfilled, of a future Sure to have contained joy at last. No, the love between two Lives in the stolen moment Remembered in peace.

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Date: 5/14/2015 2:29:00 PM
The way we relate has certainly changed and you've captured that sense of feeling that does not need to be physical to be appreciated. Enjoy the site Brendan and welcome.
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/14/2015 3:36:00 PM
Hi Patricia, many thanks for your understanding words. So true! Thanks for the welcome, nice site and enjoying it so far. Take care, Brendan.
Date: 5/12/2015 11:03:00 AM
ooh that must have been a difficult task... but writing does help you and make you feel lighter... keep writing
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/12/2015 11:05:00 AM
You are so right! I will keep writing - it certainly helps! Thanks for your kindness.
Date: 5/12/2015 10:52:00 AM
Loved your poem Brendan... welcome to poetry soup... you are going to love it here as I have... thank you for your nice words on my poem.. regards, nad!
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Brendan Osborne
Date: 5/12/2015 10:59:00 AM
Hi Nad, Thank you and you're welcome too! Yes I'm enjoying Poetry Soup so far - such a nice friendly lot we are! :-) This poem is my true story unfortunately, but I find it cathartic to put these words down. Looking forward to more reading and writing on here! :) Regards Brendan!
Date: 5/10/2015 7:23:00 AM
A poem's question resolved in the last stanza.
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