Ultimate Unrequitedness

Ultimate Unrequitedness
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Before we met in the flesh

We waltzed with words on a website for dating,

A mating dance for a modern world


We clicked online and off

Profiles made for blending

Amending our previous life errors


For two forty-something's 

Fortunate to find old fashioned love

Above anything they'd experienced 'til now


We found common ground

In our un-common past

At last, for two, the one.


Optimistic for our coupling

A future uncertain yet sure 

His and hers' mature gift.


She died on a Thursday

Slain by an off springs hand, who emptied

The sand of her life's timer.


Our non-existent plans shattered

By a sick boys' mind

Find it hard to blame the illness, not the child.



What becomes of loves' chemistry

when one element is no more,

Torn from the noble bond.


Surviving this trauma

Does the partner left as one

Become the ultimate unrequited lover.


Dwelling on the promise

Unfulfilled, of a future

Sure to have contained joy at last.


No, the love between two

Lives in the stolen moment

Remembered in peace.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Graham Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 2:29 PM
The way we relate has certainly changed and you've captured that sense of feeling that does not need to be physical to be appreciated. Enjoy the site Brendan and welcome.
Osborne Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 3:36 PM
Hi Patricia, many thanks for your understanding words. So true! Thanks for the welcome, nice site and enjoying it so far. Take care, Brendan.
Relish Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 11:03 AM
ooh that must have been a difficult task... but writing does help you and make you feel lighter... keep writing
Osborne Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 11:05 AM
You are so right! I will keep writing - it certainly helps! Thanks for your kindness.
Relish Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 10:52 AM
Loved your poem Brendan... welcome to poetry soup... you are going to love it here as I have... thank you for your nice words on my poem.. regards, nad!
Osborne Avatar
May 12, 2015 at 10:59 AM
Hi Nad, Thank you and you're welcome too! Yes I'm enjoying Poetry Soup so far - such a nice friendly lot we are! :-) This poem is my true story unfortunately, but I find it cathartic to put these words down. Looking forward to more reading and writing on here! :) Regards Brendan!
Ward Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 7:23 AM
A poem's question resolved in the last stanza.
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