Ultimate Love Song

Sweet melody
soft, beautiful
intricate, precise
intimate, wonderful

Beautifully crafted love
consumes me 
my heart humming along
to the
Ultimate Love Song!!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
February 13, 2010 at 6:49 PM
Sweet piece >> James
Colby Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 9:18 AM
that is sweet i love it britt i love the melody of the songs
G Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 3:27 PM
ahhh sweet!!
Loveless Avatar
January 15, 2010 at 10:58 AM
lol i like this.
Bourner Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 3:18 PM
you sould put some music notes to this one! ------Ell
Guzzi Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 10:34 AM
I hear you singin! Light & Love
Smith Avatar
January 6, 2010 at 9:31 AM
This one has energy.
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