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I Form - Imagism Poetry Contest. Sponsored by Constance La France. Date written: 09/25/2024

in the fury of battle... a dragon draws back her long, serpentine neck revealing terrifying d a g g e r s in her powerful jaws -with direct aim at target - then, forcefully... lunges neck like a thrown javelin spear expecting p r o j e c t i l e vomit of engulfing fire geyser; only coughs up a slender thread of... smoke.

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Date: 10/1/2024 6:52:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, lovely poem, love how creative it is, Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/5/2024 3:01:00 PM
Thank you very much for the feedback and my placement, dear Constance:-)
Date: 9/27/2024 11:37:00 AM
Great image. I am not at the winner list but I am sure this one did well
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 10/5/2024 3:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Andrea:-)
Date: 9/25/2024 11:04:00 PM
The image is vivid with a unexpected turn in the end. Nicely penned, Edward.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/26/2024 4:14:00 AM
Thank you very much, Subimal:-)
Date: 9/25/2024 9:52:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your creative "Uh Oh" write. "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a blessed/wonderful day writing away.............
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/25/2024 6:38:00 PM
Thank you very much for visiting, Paula.:-)

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