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Ugly Swan, Pretty Frog

I had wings that flopped here and there She had legs that spread in the air She jumped for joy each time I swooned Even I tripped all over by noon She would lick all my wounds away I the ugly swan would shyly play This beautiful frog with her heart on fire She heated the very essence of my desire My wings were clipped from early on If I tried to fly I only flipped and tumbled All the other swans did laugh So alone I was left to fend for myself She the frog, ever so kind She took all my pain right out of my mind So an impulse struck me from I don’t know where I kissed this frog, right then and there A princess appeared before my eyes She smiles and kisses me on the lips A miracle of sorts did transpire As we flew away on my wings of desire Note: Ancient Proverb: A Malaysian Swan never flies far before he drowns

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 9/15/2014 10:29:00 PM
My hands are up I give up. Magnificent!
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Date: 9/15/2014 6:03:00 PM
remarkable, arthur! love it!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/15/2014 7:09:00 PM
thank you so much hija
Date: 9/14/2014 7:57:00 AM
Both your swan poems are delightful to read my friend. You sir, have a very brilliant muse...
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/15/2014 7:08:00 PM
and a fool! but you are so kind Robert, thank you
Date: 9/13/2014 4:48:00 PM
splendid theme providing an element of contrast for this tale,arthur... incredible!.. huggs
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/15/2014 7:07:00 PM
thank you so much Nette!!!!
Date: 9/13/2014 7:08:00 AM
Lovely story sweetie, you threw me off losing the rhyme in the third stanza and the couplet of the fifth, but the rest flowed so good and had a neat story. Hugs baby xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 9/15/2014 10:27:00 PM
HaHaHaHa!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2014 11:20:00 AM
ah well in third stanza, on purpose, and BINGO you win the prize for mentioning this, "If I tried to fly I only flipped and tumbled" now if you do that all the time and you an Ugly Swan you cant go about writing a perfect stanza, even if your Ted Danza
Date: 9/13/2014 7:04:00 AM
Aww...how romantic
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2014 11:28:00 AM
Cheers
Date: 9/13/2014 3:09:00 AM
An interesting fable. love it.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2014 11:28:00 AM
Thanks John!
Date: 9/13/2014 12:45:00 AM
Wow flying wid wings of desire,, sure to fly high n touch sky Arthur! What a lovely expression n emotional words, love ur poem!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2014 11:28:00 AM
Thank you!!

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