Ugly Jerk

Ugly jerk mouth tampers in others affairs black heart white Zionist
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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 7:50 AM
A most potent drop of ink. Blood stirring. I commend you and congratulate you for your POTD honour. xomo
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 12:07 PM
Thank you!
Vaso Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 10:43 PM
Zionism is a ideology based on supremacy of one group of people over all others much like Nazism, or even the KKK. It is less than 150 years old, they claim not to be religious, even god gave them all they steal today , 3000 years ago. It was founded in Europe by whites, this is the last vestiges of colonialism.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 30, 2025 at 7:12 AM
100% agreed, they are the most racial people in the world!
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:56 AM
I see this as political ranting with religious overtones, and instead leans heavily into inflammatory language. This piece is wildly inaccurate: In contemporary discourse, ‘Zionist’ is often misused or weaponised, especially in polemical or conspiratorial contexts. The phrase ‘white Zionist’ in the poem seems to conflate racial and political identities in a way that’s historically inaccurate and emotionally charged. Zionism has always been a diverse movement, including Jews from Europe, the Middle East, North Africa, and beyond.
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 6:57 AM
I did correspond with his uncle in India - mostly about poetry and Zen.
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 5:15 AM
By the way, in case you were wondering, I wasn’t being sarcastic. I mean it.
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 3:00 AM
Wow! I had family connections but jeez, not with heads of state and people who helped change the world. Would love to hear more. If you tell me Gandhi used to bounce you on his knee as a bubba I’ll be super impressed.
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 2:11 AM
KT: I live in hope ...
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 2:10 AM
I will say this only once more: Just because I live in SA at the moment, does not define my beliefs. On the subject of the late President Mandela (a bit of respect here, please): I often dined with him when the Parlaiment was in sitting (family connections). Don't judge me by your limited understanding of issues you know nothing about, Arthur. Thank you.
Vaso Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:54 AM
Then again lets look your background that explains a lot, poetry has for centuries been a tool to stand up against oppression, you know a fellow Nelson Mandela maybe, even if true I wold speak up against genocide, not pettiness. Disgusting.
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:41 AM
I don’t think you’re gonna find any nuance in this piece. It’s just hate disguised as opprobrium.
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:21 AM
Abdullah Alhemaidy, your phrase ‘ugly jerk mouth’ caught my ear—it made me wonder if it's a translation of an Arabic idiom like "fam qabih?". Is there a cultural nuance behind it I might be missing?
M  Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:53 PM
Congratulations Abdullah on your POTD. Please try and enjoy your special moment. Ignore the negativity and focus on the positives and the kind congratulatory comments you receive! Debx
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 8:27 AM
Thank you very much lovely Deb :-) Ugly Jerk is not the poem of the day, the poem of the decade!
Vaso Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:55 AM
Thank you Deb, for being human, :)
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:42 AM
Lol
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Zionists actually collaborated with the Nazis, a little known fact, birds of a feather and all. In looking for a homeland they actually scouted areas other than the land of Palestine. Before settling on terrorizing and stealing that land.
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:51 PM
Before c1948 Jews, Muslims and Christians lived in peace there. Most Zionists have no indigenous roots to the land they are Europeans and now Americans, The irony that many Palestinians are of Jewish decent, they converted after Arab invasion, because they wished to stay on their land.
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:50 PM
Standing up against genocide and a group of people who openly say Palestinians are not humans, is not racism nor hate, it is standing up against hate and racism. How foolish to claim a people with no army, navy or air force are the aggressors against a nuclear power, that kills its own people (yes IDF killed many concert goers, fact checked by Israeli sources) 1 of 1000's of war crimes.
Vaso Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 10:50 PM
I have been in the last 10 years all over the region, please no one tell my own eyes lie to me. I just returned from Syria, where the IDF actually bombed the Druze as an excuse to go and save the Druze. This is a typical false flag op, they have done 1000's.
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:13 PM
Yawn…stretch! Context is everything. Zionism is not a political ideology. It is an ancestral and spiritual connection for Jewish peoples of faith. Antisemites use it as a racial slur and its use, especially in the context of this post, is inherently racist and hateful. You can dance around that all you like but it is your site to do as you please.
Carmack Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 1:07 AM
I made a reference earlier, but it mysteriously disappeared, thus my warning to you earlier. God may have spared Trump, but I do believe God has 'turned the U.S. over', though I may be wrong about this, but all the signs are here. In part, confirmed by what is happening in response to this poem.
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:54 AM
Rob, not dead yet but on life support spiritually and culturally. There’s no denying that. Not just America, but all English speaking democracies. Trump in his gruff direct uncompromising way is trying to breathe life and God back into her limp body. I’m convinced God spared his life to do it!
Carmack Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:43 AM
It is a sad day, been sad decades in my country. Cumulation of liberal ideologies pushed and encouraged by opposing conversative groups against the one that helped build this country. A very clever and effective tactic. Just takes a long time. The U.S. is dead, most here either don't realize it, or worse, don't care.
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:00 PM
For stating facts and truths? Would be a sad day.
Carmack Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 4:41 PM
Careful Keith, you might get deleted.
Lawless Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:50 PM
when all else fails blame it on the algor
Anaya Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 5:19 AM
Backatcha!
Trestrail Avatar
July 29, 2025 at 12:45 AM
Wrong again, Anaya, but thanks for playing!
Anaya Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 9:23 PM
@ KT, check your facts you have made a lot of errors about Biden...also Trump said that he would have all conflicts (wars) his words, within 24 hrs of taking office..ended. How's that going? Netanyahu is still committing genocide, images of skeletal children on TV. Deliberate starvation!
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:52 PM
When I say Joe I mean the Autopen Administration. Joe has oatmeal for a brain.
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:35 PM
I blame Joe. He didn’t enforce Trump’s sanctions on Iran and allowed them to sell tens of billions in oil to China to finance all their proxies in the Middle East and their nuclear program. He resumed American aid to Gaza which Trump froze cos Hamas was using it to build tunnels and rockets etc. All this could have been avoided with strong leadership but the lunatics were running the asylum.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:05 PM
Zionism is a political term. We do not censor political poems, as per our terms and conditions.
Anaya Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 7:55 AM
Have you seen the movie "Joe" 1970 A bigoted factory worker and his views about others. Congratulations on POTD AA! I'm not for hate poems or an administrative approach __Anaya
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Thank you very much :-) hugs xx
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Really admin? Speaking as a white Zionist I find this post inflammatory and offensive, especially with around 40 hostages (alive and dead) still held by that death cult. Should POTD be a pulpit for hate and antisemitism? I can’t comment on the “ugly jerk mouth” part as I have no clue what that’s about.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:11 PM
@Tom, you know we do not manually choose the POTD. It is selected by an algorithm that determines which poems PoetrySoup poets like the best, within a particular timeframe. The community chose this as POTD.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:58 PM
@Tom, Please note that this is an international website. If someone writes something negative about Trump, someone will be upset. If someone writes something positive about Trump, someone will be upset. If someone writes something negative about Zionists, someone will be upset. If someone writes something positive about Zionists, someone will be upset. If someone writes something positive about Democrats, someone will be upset. If someone writes something negative about Democrats, someone will be upset. When you are on a public website, you should expect opinions that are dramatically opposed to your own.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:58 PM
This is one of the main problems with the internet: people can accept opposing thoughts, especially when they are political.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 2:04 PM
Zionism is a political term. We do not censor political poems, as per our terms and conditions. If you do not like the politics of a poet, do NOT read their poems. That way, they will not hurt your feelings.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:34 PM
@Tom and @ Keith, what is racist about it? We are curious as to why you think it's racist? Zionist is NOT a negative word nor is it a race. Is referring to someone as a "black zionist" or a "white zionist" racist in your opinion?
Carmack Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 11:24 AM
Poem took me to Romans 1:28. I am glad you see what is going on and just as important - you speak up.
Poetrysoup Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 6:19 AM
Interesting poem. It’s not what we would personally pick for POTD.However, the poem seems like it’s talking about a specific individual and not a group of individuals. How do you see it differently?
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:35 AM
And they pride themselves on calling it a family site? They might want to check out their own standards guidelines starting with No. 2 & 3 in Terms & Conditions.
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 5:16 AM
Congratulations for receiving POTD Abdullah . Maria
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:09 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:43 AM
returning to congratulate you on your POTD designation
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Kitchin Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:34 AM
Abdullah, a powerful monoku. Congratulations on POTD.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:34 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Andresen Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:47 AM
- Woow...congratulations on your p.o.t.d., A.A. :) - hugs
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:35 PM
Thank you very much :-) hugs
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:28 AM
Powerfully penned? Lol
Trestrail Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:20 PM
Jan, please don’t troll me. It makes me uncomfortable. The grown-ups are discussing something very important.
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 8:28 AM
In my opinion it IS a powerful message. Instead of mocking me why don’t you congratulate Abdullah with your own and Since you don’t seem to agree, why make a condescending remark as an ugly jerk would do? Some poets didn't like a potd on poop nor one which was considered racist -so why bother commenting if they have nothing positive to add? this is the one and only time i will interact with you!
Gifford Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:27 AM
Congratulations on winning POTD, Abdullah. Powerful words. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead as you celebrate.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:36 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Allison Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 1:16 AM
Powerfully penned Abdullah many congrats on POTD - when i saw your name I thought it was the 10 poets poem !! hugs jan xx
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:36 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Jones Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 12:42 AM
Wow! You tell them! Congratulations on your potd!
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:37 PM
Thank you very much :-) lovely Karen!
Vaso Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 11:38 PM
and I love when people speak up, the silence must stop!!!! thank you!
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:37 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Vaso Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 11:37 PM
You must know how much I love this one!
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much :-) lovely Arthur!
Velasco Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 7:59 PM
This one’s super direct and straight to the point—really gets that strong feeling across without any fluff.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Thank you very much :-)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 27, 2025 at 4:48 PM
some folks need to not talk! :-)
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 28, 2025 at 3:38 PM
Yessss
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