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an ugly gray rock, so I kicked it along amused by my memories, humming a song it was jagged and rough - I gave it no mind and punted it thrice, then left it behind … I changed up my hum and walked on alone not thinking it special, (it WAS just a stone) yet the farther I got from where it had been the more I considered that "plain" rock again something about its proportions or form contrasted just slightly, was not quite the norm the way that it tumbled, or lay there, just SO or maybe the way it had bounced off my toe whatever it was, I could not quite discern but decided right then, it was worth a return so, I spun myself 'round, headed back to that spot still not sure of WHY - just a feeling I got but when I returned, it had broken in two - an incredible OPAL flamed red, green and blue! scant had I known just what "ugly" could hold - all the prismatic colors that smoldered, untold! well … I couldn't help think that a lesson was there of the plain folks we see, that we pass, unaware for they are more precious than any gray stone with such wonders inside - yet we leave them alone perhaps if we gave them a wink or a grin we might find the bright of their beauty WITHIN the colors that light their charisma and grace the complexion of charms that don’t show on a face the places they’ve been or the roads they have run their moonlight romances and days in the sun the wealth of their spirit, their talents and rage they’ve a story to tell, if we’d just turn the page so, I keep in my pocket, a piece of that rock to help me recall what I learned on that walk not to take "plain" for granted, or push folks aside but instead, look for sparks of their fires … deep INSIDE. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "Overlooked Beauty" Poetry Contest, Jesse Rowe, Judge & Sponsor.

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Date: 1/15/2020 5:34:00 PM
Great message and poem.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:14:00 PM
Thank you so kindly, Eric ... much appreciated!
Date: 2/9/2019 7:03:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your wisdom gems thru your poetry. God bless you.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:15:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Beata - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 2/8/2019 5:42:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Greg:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Jan!
Date: 2/8/2019 4:35:00 PM
Hi, Gregory. I must say that this is a great piece of work. Congrats.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:17:00 PM
That's very kind, Curtis, thank you! :o)
Date: 2/8/2019 1:54:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Gregory. LOVE IT! Janice
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:18:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice - blessings! :o) <3
Date: 2/8/2019 8:49:00 AM
Aw, fantastic poem Greg! Congratulations on your win! A fave for me <3 xomo!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:18:00 PM
Many thanks, Maureen - glad to see you still "around" ... but then, this was from last year, wasn't it? ;o) <3
Date: 2/7/2019 11:38:00 PM
Wow - Beautiful. Awesome poem, Gregory. Awesome lesson. Congrats on your most deserving gold medal win. Bravo.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:19:00 PM
That's very kind of you, Line, thank you.
Date: 2/7/2019 10:54:00 PM
Congrats on your first place finish in my contest. I loved the story development. This was exactly what I was looking for in my contest.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 1/16/2020 4:19:00 PM
Many kind thanks, Jesse, I'm very pleased you found this worthy of placement. Blessings, Friend! :o)
Date: 4/22/2017 7:27:00 PM
oh YES< there is rare fire inside of so many people that we can't always see. VERY nice analogy, Greg!
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2017 11:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Andrea ... very kind words from a poet I greatly admire! Blessings! :-)
Date: 4/22/2017 10:43:00 AM
You don't get enough comments and views for a poet so accomplished... This is a gem of a poem, and even if you hadn't added the last stanza, your message would have been abundantly clear. And your rhyme, it's impeccable, as is your style. A 7 from me.
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/22/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Darren, that means a great deal coming from a writer as accomplished as yourself ... very kind of you, my friend, and so appreciated!
Date: 4/20/2017 3:32:00 AM
what a fabulous message and WOW what a find - I have a necklace with a small 'black' opal from lightning ridge but it pales into insignificance to your incredible find and only goes to prove the beauty is in the inside and we need to look beyond what is on the outside:-) hugs Jan xx
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2017 3:18:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Jan - so much in our lives we take for granted, or judge from the outside alone ... Opals are the perfect example of how much wonder can be found on the inside! Blessings! :-)
Date: 4/20/2017 1:36:00 AM
An inspiring message in this fabulous write Greg, I love it, seven+++
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Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 4/20/2017 1:47:00 AM
Thank you so much, Elizabeth - what a wonderful comment! Blessings! :-)

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